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author either translated a foreign novel or is practicing their English. either way, its basically unreadable, most notably, the conversations make little to no sense at all. it basically reads like an asian who has been practicing english for 3 months trying to speak english.
hard to follow, due to grammar errors, jumbled sentences, probably be better if it was edited more, for better flow. but just couldn't get past ch. 4 because it was just to confusing.
Aunque no me gusta mucho que este saltando de mundo a mundo y de realidad a realidad, la verdad me gusta mucho como avanza la historia, al volverse vampiro no se volvio 100%op, tuvo que suceder muchas cosas para que ocurriera eso, pero en fin, espero que el autor no deje caer esto. Esta bueno
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This is NOT a SYSTEM story so that is good. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
regular updates? It is worth telling more about his teleportation ability. I'm waiting for the continuation![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Write me positive reviews(yes, only positive ones, don't get me upset...) and I'm not extorting or anything, just if you liked the story write a review! I would appreciate it!
author either translated a foreign novel or is practicing their English. either way, its basically unreadable, most notably, the conversations make little to no sense at all. it basically reads like an asian who has been practicing english for 3 months trying to speak english.
hard to follow, due to grammar errors, jumbled sentences, probably be better if it was edited more, for better flow. but just couldn't get past ch. 4 because it was just to confusing.
Aunque no me gusta mucho que este saltando de mundo a mundo y de realidad a realidad, la verdad me gusta mucho como avanza la historia, al volverse vampiro no se volvio 100%op, tuvo que suceder muchas cosas para que ocurriera eso, pero en fin, espero que el autor no deje caer esto. Esta bueno
揭示劇透 This is NOT a SYSTEM story so that is good. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
regular updates? It is worth telling more about his teleportation ability. I'm waiting for the continuation![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Write me positive reviews(yes, only positive ones, don't get me upset...) and I'm not extorting or anything, just if you liked the story write a review! I would appreciate it!