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Honestly a great read but after a certain period of time it became all about izuku this izuku that . I get it he loves his brother but it's too much it's borderline psychotic . I want to read more about not how he babysits izuku . Anyway it's great I would definitely recommend giving it a try
great story the only thing that i really hate about it is the word witch that you use instead of which.
Fantastic novel! Basically reborn as madara but the MC is vastly different, I love how he seems so much more human than a lot of other MC’s! Amazing writing as well! Author you might want to change the novels setting to Fanfic from Novel as that way u will get more readers :)
I love everything about this. Although i am sad to see her die that way with out those two talking it out before leaving for a mission like that.
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It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
not bad, I like itThis is Good Compare to other ff that I have read similarly to this.
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Honestly a great read but after a certain period of time it became all about izuku this izuku that . I get it he loves his brother but it's too much it's borderline psychotic . I want to read more about not how he babysits izuku . Anyway it's great I would definitely recommend giving it a try
great story the only thing that i really hate about it is the word witch that you use instead of which.
Fantastic novel! Basically reborn as madara but the MC is vastly different, I love how he seems so much more human than a lot of other MC’s! Amazing writing as well! Author you might want to change the novels setting to Fanfic from Novel as that way u will get more readers :)
I love everything about this. Although i am sad to see her die that way with out those two talking it out before leaving for a mission like that.
揭示劇透 It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
not bad, I like itThis is Good Compare to other ff that I have read similarly to this.