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Hey I liked your book you know me hint my name starts with a G and ends with D. Again your book made me feel happy and forget my worries
What I noticed when reading the first two chaps of this book is the lack of short paragraphs aside from that it's all good
The idea for the book is nice but the author can at least make the chapters lomger
Good story to read . someone can ready this who wants to forget their present thoughts . Can take you into the story probably a good one for a short reading
Hey I liked your book you know me hint my name starts with a G and ends with D. Again your book made me feel happy and forget my worries
What I noticed when reading the first two chaps of this book is the lack of short paragraphs aside from that it's all good
The idea for the book is nice but the author can at least make the chapters lomger
Good story to read . someone can ready this who wants to forget their present thoughts . Can take you into the story probably a good one for a short reading