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It's actually very good so far I like the way the author is incorporating his own ideas into this novel. I also like that the author has added science into it and making the character actually have addictions or impulses just makes the character more real to me because we all have our faults. Another thing if you are not liking his character in the first 5-6 chapters keep reading him being an alcoholic is a minor fault in his character and not all there is to him obviously but people like to think that's all there is to his character and call him garbage which is not the case.
The story is under rated in my opinion has a good mc that is not like other mcs the author takes time to look up the science in whatever project the mc is doing and makes hard projects like the race change project not just a easy thing but a actual hard thing to do.
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MC is a miserable nonentity. He's a pathetic trash! How can you be so pathetic? Start vomiting over the death of a raccoon... a man over thirty years old... he's a worm... otherwise you can't call such a miserable creature. And the beginning was promising... but the moment of vomiting ruined all hopes for the MC :(
Although some hiccups at the beginning, it keeps getting better and better.
This story for the first 13 chapters i love it so please dont dropp and continue!!!!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Gave story development 4 cause you created a female Vali💀💀. Bruh whyyyyyyy. But the rest of the story is
Bro love the story. Mc is a balance between a fighter and a researcher. But pls no genderbend man. So many good fanfic were ruined because of it🙃🙃
Well, I gave this story a chance after "True Dragon", which honestly disappointed me, and I tried to give this a chance, but seriously, what was the need to make such a disgusting MC. I don't know about the others, but that alone kills any interest or desire to continue reading this, good luck to those who will still read this.
Slap a reincarnation tag on the story please. ........................................................................................................................
Harika hikaye ana karakteri sevdim.He joins the Azazel.I hope Rias and Akeno aren't in the harem.---Harika hikaye ana karakteri sevdim.He joins the Azazel.I hope Rias and Akeno aren't in the harem.---
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It is good the story is good I like the mc doe totally good ff I want to see more chaps author
Shameless review yes. A lot of you seem to not like the genderbend that much, but I only planned to genderbend Vali in the first place, so if you're worried about me doing it again don't worry. Although Ophis will probably still have a more "feminine" persona, whatever that means.
It's actually very good so far I like the way the author is incorporating his own ideas into this novel. I also like that the author has added science into it and making the character actually have addictions or impulses just makes the character more real to me because we all have our faults. Another thing if you are not liking his character in the first 5-6 chapters keep reading him being an alcoholic is a minor fault in his character and not all there is to him obviously but people like to think that's all there is to his character and call him garbage which is not the case.
The story is under rated in my opinion has a good mc that is not like other mcs the author takes time to look up the science in whatever project the mc is doing and makes hard projects like the race change project not just a easy thing but a actual hard thing to do.
揭示劇透 MC is a miserable nonentity. He's a pathetic trash! How can you be so pathetic? Start vomiting over the death of a raccoon... a man over thirty years old... he's a worm... otherwise you can't call such a miserable creature. And the beginning was promising... but the moment of vomiting ruined all hopes for the MC :(
Although some hiccups at the beginning, it keeps getting better and better.
This story for the first 13 chapters i love it so please dont dropp and continue!!!!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Gave story development 4 cause you created a female Vali💀💀. Bruh whyyyyyyy. But the rest of the story is
Bro love the story. Mc is a balance between a fighter and a researcher. But pls no genderbend man. So many good fanfic were ruined because of it🙃🙃
Well, I gave this story a chance after "True Dragon", which honestly disappointed me, and I tried to give this a chance, but seriously, what was the need to make such a disgusting MC. I don't know about the others, but that alone kills any interest or desire to continue reading this, good luck to those who will still read this.
Slap a reincarnation tag on the story please. ........................................................................................................................
Harika hikaye ana karakteri sevdim.He joins the Azazel.I hope Rias and Akeno aren't in the harem.---Harika hikaye ana karakteri sevdim.He joins the Azazel.I hope Rias and Akeno aren't in the harem.---
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It is good the story is good I like the mc doe totally good ff I want to see more chaps author
Shameless review yes. A lot of you seem to not like the genderbend that much, but I only planned to genderbend Vali in the first place, so if you're worried about me doing it again don't worry. Although Ophis will probably still have a more "feminine" persona, whatever that means.