Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

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christa

This is such an amazing concept for a fan-fiction book. I’m really looking forward to seeing what the author does with it!!!

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Ashura03

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Kurosis

Love the story so far. But that doesn’t matter what matters is you don’t drop it like the other CD fanfic. Would be a shame. And the rating should be higher 😡

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leo26

A well written fanfic with good quality Grammer.My problem with this fanfic is that its frustrating to read, The drama in this fanfic makes my head hurt because of all the stupid wuxia cliches there are in this novel.I read fanfic to relax not to feel frustrated and this to me is a frustrating read, Especially the last few chapters have been intorable in the department and I also don't like the decision of him having no element affinity, his literal name was fire fist ace and you didn't even give him fire affinity and to me that's disappointing and I only see that decision making more unnecessary drama in the story. Overall good quality story but I won't recommend it.

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Daoist8pUWci

How is it that every fanfiction that starts out as irony about cultivators turns into a regular cultivator novel? Author, return to the light side of the force.

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GodLol

the reason I liked coiling drogans was because the people in it were so much better than other Chinese novels that are all about petty revenge and face slapping but in your story you made them all into young masters I wouldn't mind if u did it to some random characters but u did it to the main family when they were super nice and chill in the original, the mother was literally a Saint and for some reason you made her petty and comically evil ,all in all if you liked coiling dragon for its refreshing pace of almost no young masters this story is probably not for you. also, Ace is super au he is not even a little bit like in one piece it you should think of Ace as an oc in the fanfic.

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DaoOfVore

iits fanfic, the fanfic author is dragging the story against rough asphalt with 100 worded chapters just to say he put out a chapter when most of us rather he take 2-3 days to take his time with the chapters and let us know if any irl circumstances pop up and he/she will be away for some time.

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LifeGivesYouLemons

First off I'll say that the grammar of the story is great and the idea was unique. Coiling Dragon was one of the first novels I have read so a fanfic of it is always nice to see. Light spoilers below. There are however a few big issues. In the first few chapters the MC declares to be less impulsive in this life due to his actions having consequences in his previous life. While calm in the beginning within a few chapters the MC throws that all away and becomes a lot more antagonistic than most Chinese MCs to basically everyone with power, which, funnily enough have consequences. I also do not understand the need for the non element during the test and while I'm not sure if that will change or not later, it is unnecessary drama that is more liable to annoy readers then make them want to read further. Considering he was known as "Fire" Fist Ace, many readers probably logically assumed that fire would be his element. Of course the hype before the element test where the MC of course antagonizes someone to then have the curve ball where he has no elements makes it that much worse to accept. Therefore I've had to unfortunately rage quit due to this cliché where there always has to be a problem with an MC in a Chinese novel. Good luck author, I still say that the novel is unique and definitely worth a read.

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Malikim

Bad Fanfic ~ ~ ~ ~ Bad story

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_Immortal_Panda_

Just for the fact it’s IETs novel fanfic(there are so less fanfic of these, or I haven’t been able to find) and till now how much I had read, I think it’s got a great potential!! Keep up the great work author and please don’t drop it. ❤️❤️

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PUERKO_Senpai

It is a very addictive story, it has its ups and downs but it is very good. It impresses me how the author managed to perfectly capture the personality of Ace, a reckless idiot with a good heart and a hunger for adventure.

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Artenser

quiet good story beginning looking forward for your story

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SLIKOH

A fanfiction on Coiling Dragon with Ace,its amazing,i love they fanfiction on Coiling Dragon,thank you author ! ---------------------------------------------

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PUERKO_Senpai

Nice fanfiction!!! but . . . author-dono will write LEMONS, please!!!~~~~~

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ScionOfDegeneracy

Bro writing a CD fanfic with focusing only on the Mortal world. The world of CD is infinite, so much to explore.

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Einstein3

Look, I'm a sucker for Coiling Dragon. It was one of my first novels within the genre and to this day, it holds a special place in my heart. That's not the only reason to love this story, though. Writing Quality: Superb. It's original and doesn't follow the plot at all while retaining a great amount of the originals charm. Story Development: While there are some clichés and tropes, the author plays around with them in a good way. You can predict the plotlines pretty well if you are a veteran in the genre but it's executed in a charming way so I see no real problem here. Character Design: 5 stars without a doubt. Ace feels alive as do all of the supporting characters. Kong is an arrogant lil sh*te but we love him anyways. Updating Stability: It's never going to be enough so I can only give 4 stars here, sorry. World Background: I love the way the author is expanding on the source material. His inclusion of Haki is fluid and I'm heavily invested in the path to power that Ace will take. It's one of the strong points of the novel and he's keeping us on our toes with it. Conclusion: If you loved the original, you'll adore this one too. If you haven't read the original, you don't have to as the author explains most things rather inclusively but I still recommend reading the original simply because it's a good novel. Thank you for picking up such an underappreciated world, author. I really hope you'll take it all the way to the end even though it's an incredibly daunting task. However far you'll go with it, I'll be with you every step.

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Yuval_Zabary

it is seems good though i wonder what element he will have, or maybe even an edict?

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Sammy_The_Sloth

enjoyed it very much, till the simping began .