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early chapters were super good until chapter 180 . The author tried to write in a "sophisticated" way, and it was a mood killer. after chapter 200 ,bro did a 180-degree angle and changed the story entirely. I was trying to get *hard, but i can'twith this new OF A BS STYLE OF WRTING!!!
Hey please try to add your discord link in novel description bro And please send invite me the invite Link.............. Discord username - #akhil3528
Hmm what can I say, I'm blushing just reading the first few chapters. Though I'm not a big fan of mind control the idea of doing it in public is really great for me. Also, opening up with chapter 3 is definitely a good choice. Though the story does make you hold your phone with 1 hand with the other one busy wahahahah!
The start starts good but at the middle the author just starts copying entire paragraphs or describing the same scene in a single chapter multiple times.
Very good at the beginnig then it became very bad/ The chapters consist of fillers like " He came in the room and looked at her. He walked in in the room and stared at the woman".
Not a fan of mind control. I was hoping for something new, but it's generic and an overused concept. Dropped. Not for me.............😑😑😑😑😑😑
Ha what a pity... you who had to make other men harness the power of the mc? Well I can't tolerate chapter 29, I always leave my moral concepts behind when I read fantasy stories because it's basically another reality, but the things I can't swallow... maybe if the guys were at least the women's husbands I could try not to call, but that's too much. It was good, but not so much.
Is there ntr or yuri? -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_-
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Seriously I don't like the concept at all. It's just mind control and there is no fun if you get everything easily. People will like it as long as they are horney. LoL
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Feels like one of em time stopping Mangas. When will the MC/God(?)/the world(?) make all em chicks or people around them aware of the immoral things they been doing? I believe the story would be good by two levels if we get some reaction from, at the very least them chicks he been clapping, shock, surprise, embarrassment and such... Would be nice
Hmmm, I needed a fantasy novel to push my fantasy genre FPs at, this is not bad at all! Carry on! ^^
First few chapters are okay. Writing is a bit muddled, switching between 1st 2nd and 3rd person. In later chapters, writing gets worse, and the author literally copy-pastes entire paragraphs to pad space. Do not read this story.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
love the normalcy power but he shouldn't change world and juat enjoy the powers himself and be more sutle like acting like massage chair.thete should also me urban exploring story in background.
Need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I really love this book but I am afraid of low chapter count Author sama please continue this Novel don't drop it.... please increase chapters release frequency
GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!
early chapters were super good until chapter 180 . The author tried to write in a "sophisticated" way, and it was a mood killer. after chapter 200 ,bro did a 180-degree angle and changed the story entirely. I was trying to get *hard, but i can'twith this new OF A BS STYLE OF WRTING!!!
Hey please try to add your discord link in novel description bro And please send invite me the invite Link.............. Discord username - #akhil3528
Hmm what can I say, I'm blushing just reading the first few chapters. Though I'm not a big fan of mind control the idea of doing it in public is really great for me. Also, opening up with chapter 3 is definitely a good choice. Though the story does make you hold your phone with 1 hand with the other one busy wahahahah!
The start starts good but at the middle the author just starts copying entire paragraphs or describing the same scene in a single chapter multiple times.
Very good at the beginnig then it became very bad/ The chapters consist of fillers like " He came in the room and looked at her. He walked in in the room and stared at the woman".
Not a fan of mind control. I was hoping for something new, but it's generic and an overused concept. Dropped. Not for me.............😑😑😑😑😑😑
Ha what a pity... you who had to make other men harness the power of the mc? Well I can't tolerate chapter 29, I always leave my moral concepts behind when I read fantasy stories because it's basically another reality, but the things I can't swallow... maybe if the guys were at least the women's husbands I could try not to call, but that's too much. It was good, but not so much.
Is there ntr or yuri? -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_--_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_- -_-_-_-
Great job, great work and great story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=update][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=strong][img=gift][img=angry][img=golden ticket][img=thinking][img=sad][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=nervous][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=Speechless][img=Why][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=More pls][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Shocked][img=Smitten][img=Mad][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Envy][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Envy][img=Cries][img=In a daze][img=Mad][img=Smitten][img=Sigh][img=Moneybags][img=Loving it][img=Good night][img=Relaxed]
揭示劇透 Seriously I don't like the concept at all. It's just mind control and there is no fun if you get everything easily. People will like it as long as they are horney. LoL
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
Feels like one of em time stopping Mangas. When will the MC/God(?)/the world(?) make all em chicks or people around them aware of the immoral things they been doing? I believe the story would be good by two levels if we get some reaction from, at the very least them chicks he been clapping, shock, surprise, embarrassment and such... Would be nice
Hmmm, I needed a fantasy novel to push my fantasy genre FPs at, this is not bad at all! Carry on! ^^
First few chapters are okay. Writing is a bit muddled, switching between 1st 2nd and 3rd person. In later chapters, writing gets worse, and the author literally copy-pastes entire paragraphs to pad space. Do not read this story.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
love the normalcy power but he shouldn't change world and juat enjoy the powers himself and be more sutle like acting like massage chair.thete should also me urban exploring story in background.
Need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I really love this book but I am afraid of low chapter count Author sama please continue this Novel don't drop it.... please increase chapters release frequency
GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!