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Poorly translated story you have been warned. Very hard to read at point but still a decent story.
I like the story so far. But this definitely needs some editing. Readable does not mean it doesn’t need editing. I mean the grammar being bad and sometimes names not being translated is annoying. But whenever someone says courting death is super annoying I get that from English to Mandarin some statements are translated to that catch all. But translating it back to English can you change back to what English speakers would actually say??
Amei a história ♡ Mesmo eu usando a tradução do Google deu para entender tudo Tomara que ainda tenha atualização Vim de uma pessoa que recomendou no wattpad, estava com poucas esperanças de que fosse bom... mas olha! É muito bom! Bem original Eu torço pra que ainda tenha atualizações Por favor...
I love this book!The only thing is that the author has little interest in keeping it going. So all I have to say is KEEP GOING AUTHOR! YOU CAN DO IT!
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I could tell this was a Chinese novel the second they started quoting lines in the synopsis like holy is that just a thing that's hardcoded into Chinese authors or what also the grammar is abysmal like just cus its readable dont mean it doesn't need editing
Translation is so bad. Barely readable. Interesting and can be good if translation is good... also chinese, you will definitely read something here that just screams "Chinese".
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so far it’s nice I really like that the fact he is my favorite character from Pokémon
Can you put the link to the raw ........... Dots to hit the 150 character mark.............................................................................
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The story is of an op protagonist which just happened to be in the body of pikachu. Full of the same cliches. It is ok in terms of story but bad translation ruins it.
Me gusto mucho la historia hasta ahora, sobre la escritura, realmente no tengo idea por que el traductor traduce la novela para mi. Por otra parte me gusta el personaje aun que es poco malo con sus amigos pero es divertido
Poorly translated novel but it's story plot was good. Thanks for sharing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I haven't read it yet but I find the synopsis funny, especially the part that says Thor since my mind gives it a very second context XD.I find the synopsis funny, especially the part that says Thor since my mind gives it a very second context XD.
buena historia y la verdad esta bien traducido y el unico que habla como personaje chino es el mc, aum tampoco mucho, es creo la historia china con menos racismo
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I don't understand the obsession that marvel's Chinese fanfic has with Tony stark, every fanfic Tony is involved in some way, not to mention calling Nick Fury a Roasted Egg, is it some chinese meme that everyone knows? or is it just racism? (it is not possible that every author has the same sense of humor, that is to say racist). Someone explain to me? (Google Translate)
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Poorly translated story you have been warned. Very hard to read at point but still a decent story.
I like the story so far. But this definitely needs some editing. Readable does not mean it doesn’t need editing. I mean the grammar being bad and sometimes names not being translated is annoying. But whenever someone says courting death is super annoying I get that from English to Mandarin some statements are translated to that catch all. But translating it back to English can you change back to what English speakers would actually say??
Amei a história ♡ Mesmo eu usando a tradução do Google deu para entender tudo Tomara que ainda tenha atualização Vim de uma pessoa que recomendou no wattpad, estava com poucas esperanças de que fosse bom... mas olha! É muito bom! Bem original Eu torço pra que ainda tenha atualizações Por favor...
I love this book!The only thing is that the author has little interest in keeping it going. So all I have to say is KEEP GOING AUTHOR! YOU CAN DO IT!
You can name the original, write in messages. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I could tell this was a Chinese novel the second they started quoting lines in the synopsis like holy is that just a thing that's hardcoded into Chinese authors or what also the grammar is abysmal like just cus its readable dont mean it doesn't need editing
Translation is so bad. Barely readable. Interesting and can be good if translation is good... also chinese, you will definitely read something here that just screams "Chinese".
Это действительно хорошо тотопср ли лтооьььрпгиса Со😇😇😇😇😍😇😇😇млслсдалслслсдслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслслсшслслслсшсшсшсшашслслс
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so far it’s nice I really like that the fact he is my favorite character from Pokémon
Can you put the link to the raw ........... Dots to hit the 150 character mark.............................................................................
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The story is of an op protagonist which just happened to be in the body of pikachu. Full of the same cliches. It is ok in terms of story but bad translation ruins it.
Me gusto mucho la historia hasta ahora, sobre la escritura, realmente no tengo idea por que el traductor traduce la novela para mi. Por otra parte me gusta el personaje aun que es poco malo con sus amigos pero es divertido
Poorly translated novel but it's story plot was good. Thanks for sharing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I haven't read it yet but I find the synopsis funny, especially the part that says Thor since my mind gives it a very second context XD.I find the synopsis funny, especially the part that says Thor since my mind gives it a very second context XD.
buena historia y la verdad esta bien traducido y el unico que habla como personaje chino es el mc, aum tampoco mucho, es creo la historia china con menos racismo
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I don't understand the obsession that marvel's Chinese fanfic has with Tony stark, every fanfic Tony is involved in some way, not to mention calling Nick Fury a Roasted Egg, is it some chinese meme that everyone knows? or is it just racism? (it is not possible that every author has the same sense of humor, that is to say racist). Someone explain to me? (Google Translate)
Omggggg Cuteeeee -w- ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 10/10
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