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What a novel! Fun and enjoyable to read. I like the switching POV in every chapter. I would say this will be a nice one to continue reading! Good job! ヾ(≧▽≦*)
Love both the main characters. They are so adorkable!!! The story is so funny and amusing, i know this is going to be a fun ride. I enjoyed reading every single chapter. This is the light hearted romantic comedy that I was waiting for. Best of luck author. I am waiting for more chapters
This book is too awesomely written. The writing is great and it takes smoothly inside the book without much of a trouble of understanding. The plot is great so is the progress of the story. Very hard working Mc, its a great work. Keep up the great work.
Such a fun loving story l must say... Very easy going and fun to read... I liked the starting more although I couldn't read the whole.. l like olive character... The chapters are okay also there are not grammar mistake much... So it become more interesting to read the story.. Author did a great job writting this beautiful story... And hope it will bring a great success to u...
A very interesting story, you should just work on some of the punctuations and tenses. Overall, This story has a potential of being popular.
Found out the concept of story is quite interesting and the author writing skill made it easy to imagine and read....I like Aaron and Olive different character design Keep it up dear author
The story is great right from the beginning. The characters keep the reader with a smile on their face. Definitely a master piece in the making
Very interesting story structure. I appreciate the varying POVs as it fills in the gaps AFTER it leaves you on a cliff hanger. Well done! The author does a great job at making a low stakes job have the same drama as if she's about to assassinate someone and it's soooo awesome. Can't wait to read more! :)
This is a lighthearted story with very interesting characters. Let's just say the FL alone can keep you reading all day. She says and does the most hilarious things, but she's not a 2D character. The characters have depth. Nice going.
Seems like your usual "operation: teach the playboy a lesson" vibe and the first chapter is already a hilarious enough. There is no drama yet but only rom-com along the way for the main characters. I don't have anything else to say about the story. More chapters waiting! ^_^
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Interesting story and the flow is good. The character of FL is quite bold. Loving the story. Great work author 👍
Your novel is really amazing and interesting. I really love both main characters and want to know more in the future.
Very interesting. The first few chapters already drawn the readers into the story. A little of grammar and spelling errors but doesn't affect the overall enjoyment of the story. Definitely give it a read.
Lunatics everywhere... lol it is just a fun story man. Well written and you just love the characters and how they are introduced into the story. I put this one in my library. I'll be reading it for a while. More chapters, please.
I really do so much love this book... it really enjoyable and fun to read and I really do like how every chapter just keeps on getting more interesting... I must say, the book is simply just amazing 😘😘
It's a very bubly story. Nothing dark but mostly something to enjoy with a good smile. It helps keep the nature of the book at a good pace and tone.
The story is a fun read, the fun starts from the very first chapter and I find myself laughing occasionally. Looking for something fun to read, this is a book for you. Great job author
What a fantastic masterpiece right here~ The way the Author starts the novel and introduces the characters is mind-blowing! I got completely captivated with the MC, can't wait to see what the future has in store for her >.< Keep it up Author ^^ [img=recommend][img=update]
Oh my, the FL and the ML meeting was kind of crazy. that scene got me laughing. Love the FL bubbly personality. she is so charming and the ML is kind of broody but he is quite charming They are a lovely cute match. This is going to be a fun, light romcom. I am excited to read more.
What a wonderful rom-com. So light and yet funny at the same time. The writer makes use of the first POV and present tense so well. It is hard for writers to use this writing style. Keep it up!
Wonderful!!! If you are into contemporary romance ,boy you wouldn't want to miss this!kudos![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a fun, funny and emotional novel. If you like rom-coms you will love this one, the author is doing a great job. Good beginning for a novel, I recommend! I also really like the cover art!
Very amusing and interesting. Characters thoughts are also hilarious. I really enjoyed reading it. And now I will be waiting for the updates. Hope you keep up the work. You have done really well!
enjoyable read. i really like romances that don't have alot of drama to them, makes me feel fluffy inside. would recommend to anyone looking for that type of novel!
The story is really interesting and the first time how ml and fl meet is also ver interesting. I felt hooked. But the chemistry between them is lacking and auther explained some scenes that could be very romantic in very boring way ex. the scene where ml and fl were stuck in washroom
I really like the first chapter and how you started it with her getting up to no good. Need more updates.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A light and fun read! Contemporary Romantic Fans will not want to miss.[img=update]
This is definitely a topper of the lighthearted pile. There is easy going conversation, characters that aren't overly done and the sweet spiciness of a romcom all nicely tucked into the narrative.
What a novel! Fun and enjoyable to read. I like the switching POV in every chapter. I would say this will be a nice one to continue reading! Good job! ヾ(≧▽≦*)
Love both the main characters. They are so adorkable!!! The story is so funny and amusing, i know this is going to be a fun ride. I enjoyed reading every single chapter. This is the light hearted romantic comedy that I was waiting for. Best of luck author. I am waiting for more chapters
This book is too awesomely written. The writing is great and it takes smoothly inside the book without much of a trouble of understanding. The plot is great so is the progress of the story. Very hard working Mc, its a great work. Keep up the great work.
Such a fun loving story l must say... Very easy going and fun to read... I liked the starting more although I couldn't read the whole.. l like olive character... The chapters are okay also there are not grammar mistake much... So it become more interesting to read the story.. Author did a great job writting this beautiful story... And hope it will bring a great success to u...
A very interesting story, you should just work on some of the punctuations and tenses. Overall, This story has a potential of being popular.
Found out the concept of story is quite interesting and the author writing skill made it easy to imagine and read....I like Aaron and Olive different character design Keep it up dear author
The story is great right from the beginning. The characters keep the reader with a smile on their face. Definitely a master piece in the making
Very interesting story structure. I appreciate the varying POVs as it fills in the gaps AFTER it leaves you on a cliff hanger. Well done! The author does a great job at making a low stakes job have the same drama as if she's about to assassinate someone and it's soooo awesome. Can't wait to read more! :)
This is a lighthearted story with very interesting characters. Let's just say the FL alone can keep you reading all day. She says and does the most hilarious things, but she's not a 2D character. The characters have depth. Nice going.
Seems like your usual "operation: teach the playboy a lesson" vibe and the first chapter is already a hilarious enough. There is no drama yet but only rom-com along the way for the main characters. I don't have anything else to say about the story. More chapters waiting! ^_^
揭示劇透 Interesting story and the flow is good. The character of FL is quite bold. Loving the story. Great work author 👍
Your novel is really amazing and interesting. I really love both main characters and want to know more in the future.
Very interesting. The first few chapters already drawn the readers into the story. A little of grammar and spelling errors but doesn't affect the overall enjoyment of the story. Definitely give it a read.
Lunatics everywhere... lol it is just a fun story man. Well written and you just love the characters and how they are introduced into the story. I put this one in my library. I'll be reading it for a while. More chapters, please.
I really do so much love this book... it really enjoyable and fun to read and I really do like how every chapter just keeps on getting more interesting... I must say, the book is simply just amazing 😘😘
It's a very bubly story. Nothing dark but mostly something to enjoy with a good smile. It helps keep the nature of the book at a good pace and tone.
The story is a fun read, the fun starts from the very first chapter and I find myself laughing occasionally. Looking for something fun to read, this is a book for you. Great job author
What a fantastic masterpiece right here~ The way the Author starts the novel and introduces the characters is mind-blowing! I got completely captivated with the MC, can't wait to see what the future has in store for her >.< Keep it up Author ^^ [img=recommend][img=update]
Oh my, the FL and the ML meeting was kind of crazy. that scene got me laughing. Love the FL bubbly personality. she is so charming and the ML is kind of broody but he is quite charming They are a lovely cute match. This is going to be a fun, light romcom. I am excited to read more.
What a wonderful rom-com. So light and yet funny at the same time. The writer makes use of the first POV and present tense so well. It is hard for writers to use this writing style. Keep it up!
Wonderful!!! If you are into contemporary romance ,boy you wouldn't want to miss this!kudos![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a fun, funny and emotional novel. If you like rom-coms you will love this one, the author is doing a great job. Good beginning for a novel, I recommend! I also really like the cover art!
Very amusing and interesting. Characters thoughts are also hilarious. I really enjoyed reading it. And now I will be waiting for the updates. Hope you keep up the work. You have done really well!
enjoyable read. i really like romances that don't have alot of drama to them, makes me feel fluffy inside. would recommend to anyone looking for that type of novel!
The story is really interesting and the first time how ml and fl meet is also ver interesting. I felt hooked. But the chemistry between them is lacking and auther explained some scenes that could be very romantic in very boring way ex. the scene where ml and fl were stuck in washroom
I really like the first chapter and how you started it with her getting up to no good. Need more updates.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A light and fun read! Contemporary Romantic Fans will not want to miss.[img=update]
This is definitely a topper of the lighthearted pile. There is easy going conversation, characters that aren't overly done and the sweet spiciness of a romcom all nicely tucked into the narrative.