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Sooooo, the synopsis is very funny but it just tell me what not expect and don't tell anything about what the story is really about. This review is just me asking for a complement to the synopsis. This review will be deleted if the synopsis is changed.
On the first few chapters at the moment and so far it just seems like the ramblings of a schizophrenic person, we shall see if that changes though.
Very good book. The author is really passionate and hardworking in writing chapters. Good story so far. keep up the good work.
Not what u expected from the title but I like what I see. I feel it is too rushed but maybe I just like overly descriptive stories? Meh. still good though. I like this.
Very good novel. I must say that was a unique way to get a system. Never thought you would kill the MC two times. There are no punctuation in novel but it makes it even funnier. Keep up with it brother.
Okay so overall everything is good but the humour part , well hold your stomach while reading . Its really an amazing book and hilarious to make your stomach hurt . Good Work .
Really enjoy the premise and writing style. The title makes you think its like any other system but I was wrong lol. Cant wait to read some more
WOW, like it was a roller-coaster ride... I enjoyed reading this so much, it was so fun that I lost track of time... Keep those coming, please. Absolutely loved it!
An interesting book it is indeed. Keeps you captivated, wanting to find out what will happen next.
I really like your story from the first chapter and Although I didn't read the entire story but I have one thing to say for sure that I will keep reading this different and captivating story till the end.
That was a funny chapter. Excited to know what chapter 9 is going to be about.
Chaos. That's all I can really say lol. The dialogue is super "Gen-Z" which just adds to the hilarity. Honestly, I have no idea what I just read but I laughed the entire way! If you're having a bad day, then just mosey on in here!
This is a story you stumble across in the middle of the night and wake up the next day wondering if you had a vivid dream or actually pulled back the layers of someone else's mind to experience something like this. Upon first glance, the story seems like a clusterf*** of random tidbits, but the author is just crazy enough to sew all the pieces together. There's a thin thread that ties each new detail to what you have already read so far. I admire the author's creativity in consistently producing a story that has me begging for more, wondering what will happen next and almost never guessing correctly. The unpredictability works. You'll probably have a good laugh along the way. There are a few grammar errors here and there, but otherwise, the imagination of the author shines brightly in this novel. It's overall a fun read
Apart from some minor grammar mistakes, I find this to be quite enjoyable, it has many funny moments in it that keeps me reading. A good start, I feel like it has potential.
As soon as I laid eyes on the cover art for this novel, I was transported to a higher plane of existence. The stunning artwork was like a gateway to another dimension, where I was able to bask in the glow of its divine beauty. I'm pretty sure I've achieved enlightenment just from staring at it. And the best part? It only took 0.5 of a second for me to fall under its spell. That's some powerful cover art right there!
Sooooo, the synopsis is very funny but it just tell me what not expect and don't tell anything about what the story is really about. This review is just me asking for a complement to the synopsis. This review will be deleted if the synopsis is changed.
On the first few chapters at the moment and so far it just seems like the ramblings of a schizophrenic person, we shall see if that changes though.
Very good book. The author is really passionate and hardworking in writing chapters. Good story so far. keep up the good work.
Not what u expected from the title but I like what I see. I feel it is too rushed but maybe I just like overly descriptive stories? Meh. still good though. I like this.
Very good novel. I must say that was a unique way to get a system. Never thought you would kill the MC two times. There are no punctuation in novel but it makes it even funnier. Keep up with it brother.
Okay so overall everything is good but the humour part , well hold your stomach while reading . Its really an amazing book and hilarious to make your stomach hurt . Good Work .
Really enjoy the premise and writing style. The title makes you think its like any other system but I was wrong lol. Cant wait to read some more
WOW, like it was a roller-coaster ride... I enjoyed reading this so much, it was so fun that I lost track of time... Keep those coming, please. Absolutely loved it!
An interesting book it is indeed. Keeps you captivated, wanting to find out what will happen next.
I really like your story from the first chapter and Although I didn't read the entire story but I have one thing to say for sure that I will keep reading this different and captivating story till the end.
That was a funny chapter. Excited to know what chapter 9 is going to be about.
Chaos. That's all I can really say lol. The dialogue is super "Gen-Z" which just adds to the hilarity. Honestly, I have no idea what I just read but I laughed the entire way! If you're having a bad day, then just mosey on in here!
This is a story you stumble across in the middle of the night and wake up the next day wondering if you had a vivid dream or actually pulled back the layers of someone else's mind to experience something like this. Upon first glance, the story seems like a clusterf*** of random tidbits, but the author is just crazy enough to sew all the pieces together. There's a thin thread that ties each new detail to what you have already read so far. I admire the author's creativity in consistently producing a story that has me begging for more, wondering what will happen next and almost never guessing correctly. The unpredictability works. You'll probably have a good laugh along the way. There are a few grammar errors here and there, but otherwise, the imagination of the author shines brightly in this novel. It's overall a fun read
Apart from some minor grammar mistakes, I find this to be quite enjoyable, it has many funny moments in it that keeps me reading. A good start, I feel like it has potential.
As soon as I laid eyes on the cover art for this novel, I was transported to a higher plane of existence. The stunning artwork was like a gateway to another dimension, where I was able to bask in the glow of its divine beauty. I'm pretty sure I've achieved enlightenment just from staring at it. And the best part? It only took 0.5 of a second for me to fall under its spell. That's some powerful cover art right there!