/ Movies / Vulcan Odinson - The God of Fire [MCU]
摘要
This a story about a guy reincarnated as a God in Asgard as Hela's twin brother. It is in the MCU.
NO HAREM
NO HERO COMPLEX
NO HUMBLED MC
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4.01
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I don't see why writing a psychopathic character without remorse is better than a hero. All fanfiction writers think they are original when they write such a character, but they don't. It is commonplace and often poorly developed.
Biggest issue that stands out as soon as you start reading is the grammar. It's hard to get through a single sentence without noticing the disjointed grammar mistakes. Also, the reviews in this story seem like bots, with the same "people" giving five star reviews with no elaboration.
I hope you will be able to give your reviews honestly as that would help tremendously. Hope you enjoy your read
I really wanted to like this one, but I couldn’t even finish the first chapter. I have seen my fair share of mtl novels, but this one just has grammar and sentence structural errors every. single. sentence. I literally can’t make this up.
Классная работа, очень хочется увидеть продолжение.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Please update this soon I want to see how Vulcan Odinson continues to develop as God of Fire as perhaps he could prevent Hela from being banished by King Odin
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...................................perfectly balanced as all things should be
please author don't you dare to leave this fanfiction Incomplete