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. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . mhmm . . . . . . very nice story. . . . . . the grammar is very good. . . . . . want more. . . . . . i'll write a better review when more chapters are released
I really liked it, I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more .
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its about drive its about power we stay hungry we devour put in the work put in the hours and take what ours dodododododdododododdodod doddoooooh yoooooo
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It's only 2 chapters so it's hard to say but I liked the author's other fic so it's 5 star for me, I will write another review when it gets more chapters.
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. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . mhmm . . . . . . very nice story. . . . . . the grammar is very good. . . . . . want more. . . . . . i'll write a better review when more chapters are released
I really liked it, I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more .
I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 I love this story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
is Good, is Good is Good is Good is Good is Good, is Good is Good is Good is Good is Good, is Good is Good is Good is Good is Good, is Good is Good is Good is Good
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its about drive its about power we stay hungry we devour put in the work put in the hours and take what ours dodododododdododododdodod doddoooooh yoooooo
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It's only 2 chapters so it's hard to say but I liked the author's other fic so it's 5 star for me, I will write another review when it gets more chapters.
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