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Oceans of water + pseudo-villain. A huge amount of information garbage has greatly spoiled the impression of the novel. It's also not a Villain. An ordinary main character whom everyone in the world pointlessly targets so that he slaps them in return. At least he doesn't have to lick the heroines and he can counter-attack on his own (using the system).
Don't do this injustice to us this is pure torture. Abdoning such a good novel after reading we can't get more chapters nooooo. Please give me more I want more
PLEASE TAKE MY GOLDEN TICKET PLWASE HOW DO I GIVE IT IT WONT LET ME PLEASEE THJS IS SO GOOD
This author dissed other novels about being trash but he should look at his own 😂. Only likeable thing is him being ruthless ,others things are just about drama, goody two shows, bunch of info dumps. Guess another trash novel
Tetap lajutkan tanpa Harem kerna Harem hanya akan menghambat kemajuan karakter untuk kuat wanita hanya buang buang waktu tapi tetap lanjutkan semoga berada di urutan teratas semangat
If author is going to continue this novel, then this kight be one of the best villain type stories there is!!!
I honestly liked the idea of the novel, but 90 percent of the story is info dumps and him speaking to his system. The first chapter where everything is supposed to be customized lost its meaning. He keeps getting race changes, new elements, and all the extra stuff. I wish he deserved those rewards. He didn't do anything at all. What happened, plot-wise, so far (50 chapters in) is only him beating the kids right after transmigration, some family drama regarding what happened during the beating, and a new individual becoming the family's patriarch after a voting session. This could have been done in 10-15 chapters at most. The author is good but is completely indecisive. It's like they keep changing their plans every chapter or 2. They choose something, hesitate, and then change. A rewrite is required. People only like this because the protagonist is ruthless.
A great story, i think it has real potential and I am looking forward to the future releases[img=recommend]. Author, keep up the good work!!
it's a good story so far I hope that you will continue righting more in the future.
it is a amazing novel you will got a power stone from me every time you upload a chapter ok 😆😆😆😆😆
your story is great just don't drop it and if you update daily it can be at top.
Characters seem good, the world is developed to a considerable degree, story is both unique and engaging enough, and the story has no major plot holes. Only thing of note, is sometimes the author forgets punctuation. 9/10- A good read.
overall excellent 👌,yours novels are great (matches my interest) but all are short, hope it goes longer
this was really good like this is the type of book that you binge read I hope it stays this good later on
I love this novel so far good job author. This has potential to be a top top novel. Keep up the hard-work. Ps PLS don't add a harem . There are so many copy and paste novels that have a harem and honestly they just ruin the novel. AUTHOR PLS DO NOT ADD A HAREM I AM SICK OF THEM. I HAVE FINALLY FOUND A GOOD NOVEL SOO PLS Don't ADD A HAREM PLSSSS IM BEGGING YOU!!!!! so PLS noooo haremmm!!!!
good and interesting as other novels(by the author) but just please don't drop it or complete it fast.(hope it reaches more chapters )
The writing quality is quite good I can tell that it's better than the other novel and the stability of updates is also good I am at chapter 29 as of currently. Story development is quite good however, I don't think that the Mc should remove the emotions of the original owner as it helps to build the story and I would like for the character to sometimes remain in his role even though he has fate severer and fateless rather than changing the whole plot. The character design is quite good not much to comment on. The world background for now only consist of his family and the academy was somewhat mentioned but the story is just starting so I won't judge much on that. Overall great start and hope the author doesn't change in the Mc character too much due to " character development"
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Hello. Author, just found your work and it's great .Please update story frequently And I also want to talk other thing. It's kinda coincidence. My stories some outline also match with yours. It will fun to talk with you. You can see my work Villain is on vacation.
haven't read it yet, but at least this guys does the only reasonable thing when you get reincarnated into a novel and leave all the drama behind and live somewhere else away from the plot
3 Words Don't drop it ...................................................................
love the story. it is satisfiying. but you can improve upon your grammer. the last chapter is a little too graphic. and certainly would like to see the parents getting more of his retribution.
ı am waiting with excitement. The story and character design are pretty good so far. No matter how short thr chapters are everything is fine at the moment good luck in the writing business
5☆ yes a shameless review to my own work once again, so yeah guys i started writing a new novel if you like it do add it to your collection and just spend your all power stones on me. Have A Good Read
Oceans of water + pseudo-villain. A huge amount of information garbage has greatly spoiled the impression of the novel. It's also not a Villain. An ordinary main character whom everyone in the world pointlessly targets so that he slaps them in return. At least he doesn't have to lick the heroines and he can counter-attack on his own (using the system).
Don't do this injustice to us this is pure torture. Abdoning such a good novel after reading we can't get more chapters nooooo. Please give me more I want more
PLEASE TAKE MY GOLDEN TICKET PLWASE HOW DO I GIVE IT IT WONT LET ME PLEASEE THJS IS SO GOOD
This author dissed other novels about being trash but he should look at his own 😂. Only likeable thing is him being ruthless ,others things are just about drama, goody two shows, bunch of info dumps. Guess another trash novel
Tetap lajutkan tanpa Harem kerna Harem hanya akan menghambat kemajuan karakter untuk kuat wanita hanya buang buang waktu tapi tetap lanjutkan semoga berada di urutan teratas semangat
If author is going to continue this novel, then this kight be one of the best villain type stories there is!!!
I honestly liked the idea of the novel, but 90 percent of the story is info dumps and him speaking to his system. The first chapter where everything is supposed to be customized lost its meaning. He keeps getting race changes, new elements, and all the extra stuff. I wish he deserved those rewards. He didn't do anything at all. What happened, plot-wise, so far (50 chapters in) is only him beating the kids right after transmigration, some family drama regarding what happened during the beating, and a new individual becoming the family's patriarch after a voting session. This could have been done in 10-15 chapters at most. The author is good but is completely indecisive. It's like they keep changing their plans every chapter or 2. They choose something, hesitate, and then change. A rewrite is required. People only like this because the protagonist is ruthless.
A great story, i think it has real potential and I am looking forward to the future releases[img=recommend]. Author, keep up the good work!!
it's a good story so far I hope that you will continue righting more in the future.
it is a amazing novel you will got a power stone from me every time you upload a chapter ok 😆😆😆😆😆
your story is great just don't drop it and if you update daily it can be at top.
Characters seem good, the world is developed to a considerable degree, story is both unique and engaging enough, and the story has no major plot holes. Only thing of note, is sometimes the author forgets punctuation. 9/10- A good read.
overall excellent 👌,yours novels are great (matches my interest) but all are short, hope it goes longer
this was really good like this is the type of book that you binge read I hope it stays this good later on
I love this novel so far good job author. This has potential to be a top top novel. Keep up the hard-work. Ps PLS don't add a harem . There are so many copy and paste novels that have a harem and honestly they just ruin the novel. AUTHOR PLS DO NOT ADD A HAREM I AM SICK OF THEM. I HAVE FINALLY FOUND A GOOD NOVEL SOO PLS Don't ADD A HAREM PLSSSS IM BEGGING YOU!!!!! so PLS noooo haremmm!!!!
good and interesting as other novels(by the author) but just please don't drop it or complete it fast.(hope it reaches more chapters )
The writing quality is quite good I can tell that it's better than the other novel and the stability of updates is also good I am at chapter 29 as of currently. Story development is quite good however, I don't think that the Mc should remove the emotions of the original owner as it helps to build the story and I would like for the character to sometimes remain in his role even though he has fate severer and fateless rather than changing the whole plot. The character design is quite good not much to comment on. The world background for now only consist of his family and the academy was somewhat mentioned but the story is just starting so I won't judge much on that. Overall great start and hope the author doesn't change in the Mc character too much due to " character development"
揭示劇透 LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! PLEASE READ THIS GUYS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! PLEASE READ THIS GUYS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! PLEASE READ THIS GUYS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! PLEASE READ THIS GUYS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ LOVE IT!!!! LOVE IT!!! PLEASE READ THIS GUYS ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hello. Author, just found your work and it's great .Please update story frequently And I also want to talk other thing. It's kinda coincidence. My stories some outline also match with yours. It will fun to talk with you. You can see my work Villain is on vacation.
haven't read it yet, but at least this guys does the only reasonable thing when you get reincarnated into a novel and leave all the drama behind and live somewhere else away from the plot
3 Words Don't drop it ...................................................................
love the story. it is satisfiying. but you can improve upon your grammer. the last chapter is a little too graphic. and certainly would like to see the parents getting more of his retribution.
ı am waiting with excitement. The story and character design are pretty good so far. No matter how short thr chapters are everything is fine at the moment good luck in the writing business
5☆ yes a shameless review to my own work once again, so yeah guys i started writing a new novel if you like it do add it to your collection and just spend your all power stones on me. Have A Good Read