3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
The story has been updated at least for more than seven chapters a week..I've been busy lately as I was taking care of something that's why I slowed down..But don't worry my readers I'll make it up to you..Thank you
Aryan,Savanna, Alexander Noel, George Gerald,kelvin,Lenny,kimberry,Oliver,Naithan,old Mr Anderson,Ellie,Abigail,Mr don,John,Dayana,Jackson,Dauson.
揭示劇透 The chapters have been updated daily..which makes the readers more curious to read more..,Characters have been designed normally according to our everyday lives..Come and spoil me my dearest readers
The story has been updated at least for more than seven chapters a week..I've been busy lately as I was taking care of something that's why I slowed down..But don't worry my readers I'll make it up to you..Thank you
Aryan,Savanna, Alexander Noel, George Gerald,kelvin,Lenny,kimberry,Oliver,Naithan,old Mr Anderson,Ellie,Abigail,Mr don,John,Dayana,Jackson,Dauson.
揭示劇透
The chapters have been updated daily..which makes the readers more curious to read more..,Characters have been designed normally according to our everyday lives..Come and spoil me my dearest readers