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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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Very good, I really liked the plot and I'm glad it's not a Pokémon harem. The only "serious" problem is the lack of updating, there were times when I thought the work had fallen apart.😔😔
i don't understand why Jon won't end up with alysanna, arriane, Daenerys and nymeria. It sounds obvious to me if Jon wants to recreate the Targaryen dinasty and the relationship so far has insiniduated the relationship with those girls. hopefully they are included in jon's harem.
Hasta ahora nada que reprochar es una historia excelente simplemente magnífica con la escritura la historia y el mundo en si lo hace bien lo único que puedo reclamar es que hay capitulos un poco innecesarios pero todo lo demás brillante
i like it, keep it up and dont drop it, its hard to find good fanfics and this is one of them
Well, it is a nice and enjoyable reading. Like it very much. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. And I hope that it won't be dropped. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Very good, I really liked the plot and I'm glad it's not a Pokémon harem. The only "serious" problem is the lack of updating, there were times when I thought the work had fallen apart.😔😔
i don't understand why Jon won't end up with alysanna, arriane, Daenerys and nymeria. It sounds obvious to me if Jon wants to recreate the Targaryen dinasty and the relationship so far has insiniduated the relationship with those girls. hopefully they are included in jon's harem.
Hasta ahora nada que reprochar es una historia excelente simplemente magnífica con la escritura la historia y el mundo en si lo hace bien lo único que puedo reclamar es que hay capitulos un poco innecesarios pero todo lo demás brillante
i like it, keep it up and dont drop it, its hard to find good fanfics and this is one of them
Well, it is a nice and enjoyable reading. Like it very much. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. And I hope that it won't be dropped. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]