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Get an editor please. I don't know of the MC is a girl or a guy you switch it every paragraph
Love the book, it has a bit of 'young masters' but they ain't over the line for now. Had a great time reading the available chapters, I hope this book gets the popularity it deserves. Welp, waiting for future chapters!
I hope this light novel can entertain the readers a little, even though there are still many shortcomings. Thank you.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
here's a few things wrong with the story: mc dresses like a bigger editing is awful,the (he) and (she) winds me up the supposedly powerful mc is a simp.. do I need to say more
Get an editor please. I don't know of the MC is a girl or a guy you switch it every paragraph
Love the book, it has a bit of 'young masters' but they ain't over the line for now. Had a great time reading the available chapters, I hope this book gets the popularity it deserves. Welp, waiting for future chapters!
I hope this light novel can entertain the readers a little, even though there are still many shortcomings. Thank you.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
here's a few things wrong with the story: mc dresses like a bigger editing is awful,the (he) and (she) winds me up the supposedly powerful mc is a simp.. do I need to say more