In Marvel as The Hive

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ZeroX0666

Hey there, author here! Decided to do a Marvel novel for fun. Keep in mind I'm not aware of every small detail that takes part in the marvel universe and as such some things may seem odd, so just take it as an AU. :) Hope you enjoy.

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GeshaKun

Where are the updates? Where is the Author? Please do note drop

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Quake_Midaro

Eh justnbot my cup if tea its a solid 3/5 but irs basically a borderline gotta kill them all type of fic kill eat gain DNA lose what but of humanity you had in the first few chapters if your interested in mindless murderhobo this is the fic for you nothing wrong with it so far outside of the MC feels.. I don't know but puppet comes to mind so far and nothing really good either so take it as you will

this marvel is bing chilling im freezing :cold_face: this book was exactly what i needed to keep my uncle away from me. the plot is good and character i love bc i can relate to when I got to frog land in a world with a new power. i was micheal yakson

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GodLol

interesting concept but ultimately ruined by generic copy and paste mc. I just really don't see the appeal of edgy, no emotion,cocky, mcs. I just find it to be so boring.🫤

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TruthHurtsX1000

4 months amd 28 chapters. Fo i really meed say more. Its good bit not worth getting into because author will just take forever or disappear ......

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IzIm

love it so far but i wish they updated more it’s so good

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Fu_Hua_

Here's your 5 Star Author! I've read it and all I can say is that I love it

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femme_fatale

It was such a great start and there were no grammar mistakes. The story is interesting and Liliana reminds me of myself, to be honest. Keep it up, Author!

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XII_6869

if it will gonna ever be finished see you guys in 20 years😂

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Mann_Teufortian

interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great

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Anurag_Rai_4601

Read all the chapters in 4 hours, really liked the concept and pace of story. Hope that author keeps updating the story because I am hooked and want to see what will happen in future. ...................................d.d.d.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x..xx.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x..x......x.x..x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x

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Dao_of_Bibliomania

The writing is great with no grammatical errors as far as I am aware of. The stability of updates are great, they take breaks to think on the story but when written it comes out quickly, and so is basically a bunch of chapters come out over some time then a break then repeat. The story development is well written, organic, and well thought out. The character designs are good. While the world background is vast.

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Creeper12345506

Don’t really know how to write a good review, but the book has been looking good so far :)

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Colinh45

I like it a lot and I hope the updating Scandal wil Main Daily or Weekly I hoe it Will not go on hiatus any time soon en you keep the updates stady

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Stinkyfard

Pretty enjoyable read, had to look up what a few things might have been cause i’m not the most informed on Marvel, but even without that th story flows fine and is easily understandable. Author is consistently updating again as well.

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Darth_Evolution898

Well written and great direction doesn't feel rushed like eell reach the Max power with nowhere to go and lots of plot set ups rn so looking forward to the future slow updates but everyone has a life