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章節 18: Re-editing

If you are still reading this novel, thanks for the love and support. I realized my previous chapters were not proofread and not refined. So I will going over them. To make them look better.

One done editing, the chapter will have (Edited) on it. Please do read it again and give me feedback. If you like it or not.

Story is still the same with no change.


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