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Achei a história, muito boa! Com uma pegada diferente e a capacidade de experimentar vários universos de anime/mangas muito top! Uma ótima história!!!!!.
did you drop the book or something I was enjoying it at least give another chapter
Pk un diable et pourquoi la rage ??? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
author it's been months but is this drop? I really enjoyed it. I hope to see more❤️
57 chapters uh?.... So far i the bet i had was 60 chapters before charlottes drops it... i wish he makes some new ones to read but i also want him to stop to win the bet i had lol.
The Author be like: "Yes yes, add more ***t , let's make this story more ***tier!" "A ***t, I accidentally make the Protagonist smart! Now he discovered his reality has a supernatural side, but the Protagonist is a beginner and didn't know the bounded field so it's okay. Let's just make him s**pid so he won't get curious about the supernatural side of the world.😊" "And because he was now s**pid, he would not think of using his achievement points to get in touch with more magecraft.😊"
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I was really enjoying it, but the author started adding too much stuff, the other stories were almost completely forgotten (As far as I've read), where's Komi? to Saki? what happened to lumine? the author just keeps adding more things and making the story more messy and boring, and with the addition of the Fateverse in the main world, for me it ended everything, although I like Fate I don't remember any fanfic that a crossover with him gave right (Google Translate)
Oh boi....I really enjoyed this fic same as the previous one....Though I can't help but be anxious ..since it's been 19 days already and the author still didn't Update another chapter ... Overall it was good amazing in fact...It's . always the same with the past fics the author wrote ..But same as the past fics I'm worried about him not finishing this one.... Like man I just read a past fanfiction that the author wrote, the Your Lie in April Fan-fic ....and it' seems that he dropped that good fic...
there is not much to complain about, the writing, the description of the world and the descriptions of the characters are rewarding and very pleasant to watch, but sadly the development of the story is something that leaves a lot to be desired, the directionless introduction of Lumine , the limitations of the system to more than power, the massive overload of new characters (this includes a large amount of girls in the harem) the now hidden life of Hitohito in a renowned family on a possibly Multi Millionaire scale out of nowhere without warning from before and of course changes in Hitohito's personality making him extremely stupid, it is known that Hito is someone dense, but not as dense as he has been portrayed here, also the limitations of the system, why not add missions in exchange for really good improvements? load character cards or very good abilities and to finish with this review I feel that you have rushed many things in the development of the story that have simply overloaded it a lot and making it somewhat generic and with a lot of quantity than the quality that should be essential in the history, it would be good if you verified this, colleague, history is better than this and not get stuck in the same thing.
In short, it's a good story, well written and easy to read... it has that touch that drives you to keep reading, I hope the author doesn't abandon it... recommended.
I was actually depress! When i readied the first version of this, but look at this a continuation! C'mon definitely recommended if you're looking for tadano to become cool mc ff.
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a solid fanfic with good concept and execution. solid writing as well, just wish there would be more chapters
pretty dam good fanfic in my humble opinion, a breeze of fresh air compared to the usual fanfics.
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It's a good fanfic. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... I have nothing else to say(write).
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Achei a história, muito boa! Com uma pegada diferente e a capacidade de experimentar vários universos de anime/mangas muito top! Uma ótima história!!!!!.
did you drop the book or something I was enjoying it at least give another chapter
Pk un diable et pourquoi la rage ??? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
author it's been months but is this drop? I really enjoyed it. I hope to see more❤️
57 chapters uh?.... So far i the bet i had was 60 chapters before charlottes drops it... i wish he makes some new ones to read but i also want him to stop to win the bet i had lol.
The Author be like: "Yes yes, add more ***t , let's make this story more ***tier!" "A ***t, I accidentally make the Protagonist smart! Now he discovered his reality has a supernatural side, but the Protagonist is a beginner and didn't know the bounded field so it's okay. Let's just make him s**pid so he won't get curious about the supernatural side of the world.😊" "And because he was now s**pid, he would not think of using his achievement points to get in touch with more magecraft.😊"
揭示劇透 I was really enjoying it, but the author started adding too much stuff, the other stories were almost completely forgotten (As far as I've read), where's Komi? to Saki? what happened to lumine? the author just keeps adding more things and making the story more messy and boring, and with the addition of the Fateverse in the main world, for me it ended everything, although I like Fate I don't remember any fanfic that a crossover with him gave right (Google Translate)
Oh boi....I really enjoyed this fic same as the previous one....Though I can't help but be anxious ..since it's been 19 days already and the author still didn't Update another chapter ... Overall it was good amazing in fact...It's . always the same with the past fics the author wrote ..But same as the past fics I'm worried about him not finishing this one.... Like man I just read a past fanfiction that the author wrote, the Your Lie in April Fan-fic ....and it' seems that he dropped that good fic...
there is not much to complain about, the writing, the description of the world and the descriptions of the characters are rewarding and very pleasant to watch, but sadly the development of the story is something that leaves a lot to be desired, the directionless introduction of Lumine , the limitations of the system to more than power, the massive overload of new characters (this includes a large amount of girls in the harem) the now hidden life of Hitohito in a renowned family on a possibly Multi Millionaire scale out of nowhere without warning from before and of course changes in Hitohito's personality making him extremely stupid, it is known that Hito is someone dense, but not as dense as he has been portrayed here, also the limitations of the system, why not add missions in exchange for really good improvements? load character cards or very good abilities and to finish with this review I feel that you have rushed many things in the development of the story that have simply overloaded it a lot and making it somewhat generic and with a lot of quantity than the quality that should be essential in the history, it would be good if you verified this, colleague, history is better than this and not get stuck in the same thing.
In short, it's a good story, well written and easy to read... it has that touch that drives you to keep reading, I hope the author doesn't abandon it... recommended.
I was actually depress! When i readied the first version of this, but look at this a continuation! C'mon definitely recommended if you're looking for tadano to become cool mc ff.
good☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
a solid fanfic with good concept and execution. solid writing as well, just wish there would be more chapters
pretty dam good fanfic in my humble opinion, a breeze of fresh air compared to the usual fanfics.
,....,..................,..................................................................................................................................................................................
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It's a good fanfic. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... I have nothing else to say(write).
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Can someone write a Beyblade novel BeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeybladeBeyblade
A great chaprer... ****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""****†*******"""
this fanfic is great dont give up on it has potenial :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))this fanfic is great dont give up on it has potenial :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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