3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Nice is as much as I can say it is not the best but you can get addicted to the truth and it seems true also(even if it may not be) as much as I would like to deny it had got me addicted For i guess 3 will be too much and will be all in one. 4 will be best if story has to be extended and if you like overpowered mc then 1,2 will be good. Either way it is too exciting. Even thinking of what can happen next makes me shiver and my hair stand to the end with a jolt.
Tu escritura es buena. Por que no haces una novela donde el mc tiene el conocimiento de Varios Ricks. Y tiene algo asi como un sistema básico. Aúnque es bastante difícil de combinar ambos. Ya que si usa el sistema no podra usar su conocimiento. :(
Nice is as much as I can say it is not the best but you can get addicted to the truth and it seems true also(even if it may not be) as much as I would like to deny it had got me addicted For i guess 3 will be too much and will be all in one. 4 will be best if story has to be extended and if you like overpowered mc then 1,2 will be good. Either way it is too exciting. Even thinking of what can happen next makes me shiver and my hair stand to the end with a jolt.
Tu escritura es buena. Por que no haces una novela donde el mc tiene el conocimiento de Varios Ricks. Y tiene algo asi como un sistema básico. Aúnque es bastante difícil de combinar ambos. Ya que si usa el sistema no podra usar su conocimiento. :(