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Theres no PP jokes, the MC just kinda appears and hes all like ahhhh monster! Piu Piu monster ded yey, but i like the natives they seem realistic ish and the story is alright but... No PP jokes boys :(
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Theres no PP jokes, the MC just kinda appears and hes all like ahhhh monster! Piu Piu monster ded yey, but i like the natives they seem realistic ish and the story is alright but... No PP jokes boys :(
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