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Loved both of your Dovahkiin series. Although the english isn't the best but it does have it's charm in making the story feel medieval. I just wish that you would continued updating and not abandoned the fic cuz im really invested on the world building here. Do keep up the good work!![img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's great I love it, I hope the author will write an AU before Aegon the Conqueror.............................................................
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Quality of the story is very, very high. Only problem is how infrequent the updates are, I know author has a life outside writing so i can empathize and want more chapters at the same time Definitely read and add to your library so when it does update you don’t miss out
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I really like this one but he is to boastful for me so I'm dropping this sorry 😔😔
Low-key fanfictions like these are the reason why I'm still on Webnovel.
Definitely quite a good book been interesting and intriguing to read especially when they accidentally go back in time 150 yrs or so quite curious as to how it'll go for Otto Hightower but overall have enjoyed how u have done this book cant wait to read more and when ur able to get the chance to continue with this book
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I enter this fic and I see a dovahkiin who kneels down to another person takes away the meaning and damages him. I would like him to be independent and above all he even marries his daughter to another just to serve another that more garbage fic
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Oh, there once was a hero named Ragnar the Red Who came riding to Whiterun from ole Rorikstead! ---- who else wants to just kill every bard in Skyrim just hearing those first words?
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interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more. interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more.interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more.
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Its only have been 5 chapters as of this review, but so far so good. But there are a few plot holes that can't be explained...like Winterhold need the king approval to be a proper city (which he did for the GoT) but so far he keep saying "city of Winterhold" while he doesn't have permission yet...at first I thought he would use the reward from the king to get the city approval but he didn't. The second plot hole is that people seem to believe he is a Lord way to easy.
Giving this 5 stars. This is my new favorite thing. I loved your other story and you have been great with the new update. I just hope see more from the daughter and twins.
another addition to you great novels author I give you another 5 ⭐ for this great potentially novel to go on I hoped you won't drop the 1st novel you released and keep on updating this one too. Both novels has a great potential storyline and background coming from my perspective a free reader. hoping for your good health physically and mentally 🙏 thanks again for writing this novel 👌🤗✌️
Im not gonna read untill at lea 15 chp hope u dont mind but when i read a good story its torture to wait for more and i knowthis will be good because ur a good author
Continúa con el libro por favor es interesante y un buen giro................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I actively read your other book It would be quit interesting to read this if you wouldn’t mind writing a few chapters I think it has great potential
is this book still being continued? was just wondering as I really like where this book was going
Loved both of your Dovahkiin series. Although the english isn't the best but it does have it's charm in making the story feel medieval. I just wish that you would continued updating and not abandoned the fic cuz im really invested on the world building here. Do keep up the good work!![img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's great I love it, I hope the author will write an AU before Aegon the Conqueror.............................................................
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Quality of the story is very, very high. Only problem is how infrequent the updates are, I know author has a life outside writing so i can empathize and want more chapters at the same time Definitely read and add to your library so when it does update you don’t miss out
Saya sangat suka novel ini ………..,..,,,,,,.,……………………………………,,…..,,…………,… up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
I really like this one but he is to boastful for me so I'm dropping this sorry 😔😔
Low-key fanfictions like these are the reason why I'm still on Webnovel.
Definitely quite a good book been interesting and intriguing to read especially when they accidentally go back in time 150 yrs or so quite curious as to how it'll go for Otto Hightower but overall have enjoyed how u have done this book cant wait to read more and when ur able to get the chance to continue with this book
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I enter this fic and I see a dovahkiin who kneels down to another person takes away the meaning and damages him. I would like him to be independent and above all he even marries his daughter to another just to serve another that more garbage fic
揭示劇透 Oh, there once was a hero named Ragnar the Red Who came riding to Whiterun from ole Rorikstead! ---- who else wants to just kill every bard in Skyrim just hearing those first words?
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interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more. interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more.interesting so far imo. ......excited to read more.
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Its only have been 5 chapters as of this review, but so far so good. But there are a few plot holes that can't be explained...like Winterhold need the king approval to be a proper city (which he did for the GoT) but so far he keep saying "city of Winterhold" while he doesn't have permission yet...at first I thought he would use the reward from the king to get the city approval but he didn't. The second plot hole is that people seem to believe he is a Lord way to easy.
Giving this 5 stars. This is my new favorite thing. I loved your other story and you have been great with the new update. I just hope see more from the daughter and twins.
another addition to you great novels author I give you another 5 ⭐ for this great potentially novel to go on I hoped you won't drop the 1st novel you released and keep on updating this one too. Both novels has a great potential storyline and background coming from my perspective a free reader. hoping for your good health physically and mentally 🙏 thanks again for writing this novel 👌🤗✌️
Im not gonna read untill at lea 15 chp hope u dont mind but when i read a good story its torture to wait for more and i knowthis will be good because ur a good author
Continúa con el libro por favor es interesante y un buen giro................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 I actively read your other book It would be quit interesting to read this if you wouldn’t mind writing a few chapters I think it has great potential
is this book still being continued? was just wondering as I really like where this book was going