/ Video Games / Cyberpunk 2077- Trauma team
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Welcome to Night City 2077! Amazing technological progress and horrible social inequality. Extreme wealth and astonishing crime rates. Corporates, street gangs and runners. What they have in common? Violence. With violence come wounds and injuries. This is where you step in. Trauma Team. But remember we ain't saints we work for cash only. So check their balance and insurance first! Now turn on the music we got a job Trauma Team !
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寫檢討I can't wait to see what you do with this considering there's not that many cyberpunk fanfics out there. keep up the amazing work I'm rooting for you all the way
The grammar makes me look twice every two seconds to see if I misread something. The story is forced bs, i'd rather he had transmigrated directly into a newbie of the trauma team. The mc's reactions are generic and cringy. Also the whole "I predicted that i'm in trouble cause of a bad feeling" trope is a bit overused, especially in non supernatural power worlds. It's like what, did you unlock ultra instinct or something?
Not bad. Hopefully we can see an end to this fanfic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Book is fine, author needs to touch up in grammar though, some characters speak like cavemen and the writing is inconsistent when it comes to proper grammar, punctuation and vocabulary, the author I also suggest should do some more research into firearms, the technical details of them, and weapons in general.. Writing quality is down to a 3 due to authors grammar inconsistentcy World background as well due to his clear lack of knowledge of military tactics and weapons and lack of research..
I don’t write many of these reviews but I have to say this is a great novel. The author brought the character into the world a little off, but the growth and struggle while having a dark sense of humor that you would hear in the field helps paint vivid and interesting characters.
Just writing this review because I've kind of lost interest because of the fact that he will probably leave trauma team. I'm not sure if he does because I've not read that far but its the main reason I liked this fanfic, it was cool and unique to see a trauma team members daily life and without that its not as unique.
Liked the overall story, the various different cases, the small charcter development and pulling in different part of the cyberpunk world but the story gets distracting when there are writing errors or misspelled names/words. I would appreciate it if you would let me edit the story to fix those errors.
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Amazing, I love this story so much. chapter 22 was a nice plot twist. Really really looking forward to more.
揭示劇透love it. its a cool and unique read. quality: 5. really good no problems. development: 4 i only put 4 because it doesn't seem to have much of a story but that's actually preferable to me. I just wanted people to know that right now its not that story driven, more just daily life of a trauma team member. design: 5 no problems from me. it would be nice if you added a bit more to the other team members that didn't get much attention but apart from that great. stability: 5 I'm not really sure about this one, I'll pit 5 stars but we'll just have to wait and see. background: 5 quite fleshed out. it doesn't seem like you just skimmed over the wiki which is good and I can tell there's heart in it.
sorry for bad grammar english is not my first language. however i really like this story and wanted to say some nice words. i really like the characters and the fact that he went with trauma team, the main character isnt op and has a nice personality. the action scenes are good written and i am interestes in seeing how the author is going to expand the story and how it is going to progress.
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aburrido, aparte de que es todo el rato los puto mismo, tiene un equipo > completa misiones > cosas locas > se desintegra el equipo, todo el rato. Cuando por fin crees que algo va a cambiar mesclando con personajes principales o va haber algún romance, pues no era bait todo sigue igual. y así como 4 veces ya. es horrible y encima no cambia nada del canon del juego o de la serie. te hace creer que va a haber un romance con Sasha y no, se va y no vuelve nunca mas en la historia, es lo mismo que si le hubieran matado. es muy repetitivo y carece algo interesante que deje con ganas de mas, es esta imagen.
I like this fanfic a lot. The writing and English have a few mistakes but it really is better than some fanfics I have read. The concept of the fanfic and the development of the story is good. In all this is my favorite CyberPunk fanfic.
作者 Abi_Daulen
MC somehow gets to Cyberpunk 2077 world or a few years before at least. Hasn’t gotten to “canon” but anyway he joins Trauma Team and we get to see the crazy stuffs Trauma Team gets to deal with every day. I love the situations and story. MC is slowly getting his “build” together and I can’t wait for more chapters!