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Gonna make a proper review later. Coz, webnovel doesn't allow me to make a review with no words 👍👍👍👍.
it's a really good story. the character development is excellent, they really have personalities and gradual character development. as the author said the story is not fast but for that evolves very well. continue like this much courage author and happy new year by the grace of the Almighty[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
great potential but giving too much harem vibe by always showing how female characters are top beauty. single romance i hope [img=recommend][img=recommend]
A really good novel that definitely has some good points that will make you want to read it. The characters are actually pretty interesting. Needs more chapters to read for sure
Goody story, slow development of some characters and kind of feels that author left out some characters. But its only been 10 or so days in the world so far. I'm expecting author to give every important characters some SCREEN TIME too. I recommend this to anyone who are interested in a modern novel, with system and a sect based one at that.
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
The story so far interesting as it uses the two concepts in one. The world building is done very good and as for the character they are developed well. so yes it's worth reading as the story is unique. as for cons- the start is a little slow but if you can go a few chaps in you will be hooked :)
Hello everyone! Thanks for your support so far. I will try to give my best with this book and also I will try to update as much as possible. If there is anything that you point out abou the story or character design or any other things, please let me know. One last thing, I still need to edit some chapters , I will try to edit them as soon as possible.
Not bad writing quality and an interesting set up. Good character development, even though author can still work on this section. Update stability is pretty good too. Pretty good so far, I will update my review again. (Don't take offense, my review looks a bit dumb).
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Been looking for this kind of modern setting with cultivation and system mixed lalala![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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overall a good story! Author edited the first few chapters, n=but need to edit the remaining too. I have enjoyed it for now. my opinion is that author still need to give MC pov's a bit more though. If there is any new update, I will update my review later.
No typical young master s*it so far and I hope author will continue the same in his future updates. Nedd more more..................................................................................................................................................
Story itself has a good promise, it's a new setting overall. The character design and the world exploration needs further development. Still some grammatical errors and some sentences are quite awkward. But I'm quite enjoying the story telling, so overall a good read for me.
I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good. The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now 👍
IIts nice plot, a bit difficult to comprehend for me though, but that's me, I like the descriptions and character organization, kinda pondering on that digital camera lol
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good stable novel , with good character and story development. hope it lasts to the very end 🙏
Gonna make a proper review later. Coz, webnovel doesn't allow me to make a review with no words 👍👍👍👍.
it's a really good story. the character development is excellent, they really have personalities and gradual character development. as the author said the story is not fast but for that evolves very well. continue like this much courage author and happy new year by the grace of the Almighty[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
great potential but giving too much harem vibe by always showing how female characters are top beauty. single romance i hope [img=recommend][img=recommend]
A really good novel that definitely has some good points that will make you want to read it. The characters are actually pretty interesting. Needs more chapters to read for sure
Goody story, slow development of some characters and kind of feels that author left out some characters. But its only been 10 or so days in the world so far. I'm expecting author to give every important characters some SCREEN TIME too. I recommend this to anyone who are interested in a modern novel, with system and a sect based one at that.
Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰
The story so far interesting as it uses the two concepts in one. The world building is done very good and as for the character they are developed well. so yes it's worth reading as the story is unique. as for cons- the start is a little slow but if you can go a few chaps in you will be hooked :)
Hello everyone! Thanks for your support so far. I will try to give my best with this book and also I will try to update as much as possible. If there is anything that you point out abou the story or character design or any other things, please let me know. One last thing, I still need to edit some chapters , I will try to edit them as soon as possible.
Not bad writing quality and an interesting set up. Good character development, even though author can still work on this section. Update stability is pretty good too. Pretty good so far, I will update my review again. (Don't take offense, my review looks a bit dumb).
Please upload more..............................................................................................................................................................Interestinng=............................................................................
Been looking for this kind of modern setting with cultivation and system mixed lalala![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] More chapters please
overall a good story! Author edited the first few chapters, n=but need to edit the remaining too. I have enjoyed it for now. my opinion is that author still need to give MC pov's a bit more though. If there is any new update, I will update my review later.
No typical young master s*it so far and I hope author will continue the same in his future updates. Nedd more more..................................................................................................................................................
Story itself has a good promise, it's a new setting overall. The character design and the world exploration needs further development. Still some grammatical errors and some sentences are quite awkward. But I'm quite enjoying the story telling, so overall a good read for me.
I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good. The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now 👍
IIts nice plot, a bit difficult to comprehend for me though, but that's me, I like the descriptions and character organization, kinda pondering on that digital camera lol
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good stable novel , with good character and story development. hope it lasts to the very end 🙏