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Your story is fine, but it's too common, most Pokemon fanfics try to show the worst of that world, it's surprising how much dirt they throw at the series, the authors seem to deliberately ignore what makes it popular world, they seem to focus a lot on the manga and the flaws or plot holes. The worst thing is that most of these fanfics are among the most popular and it makes me wonder if the majority of readers have a bad taste for trauma or are simply masochists.
Can you continue this story please, I like the realistic view of the Pokemon world and how he adventures/struggles through survives and thru ing
Abandonado no entrar ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . .
The fanfic is really good in my opinion. It gives the Pokemon world a more realistic view that not a lot of fanfic does. It is easy to follow and understand what is happening and what the MC’s thought pattern is throughout the story. I wish the author would continue the story but it has been 5 months so I ave little hope, which is sad.
this is the worst of all the authors novels, the mc is just a unnecessary serial killer psychopath, no good plot, just bored with how predictable it is cause of how trash the mc is with people even when the people are good
brillant story, terrible development to slow and the guys remained ten through 7 or 8 time skips lasting 3 to 4 months
This fanfiction is really very interesting and I hope you will update the chapters more often This fanfiction is really very interesting and I hope you will update the chapters more often
Author thank you very much for a very interesting story. You did a great job and i am sicerly waiting for continuation. I hope you will some inspiration and will continue the story soon. I am sicerly recomanding this novel for anyone who likes to read Pokémon stories.
I really enjoyed hoy you write about the characters and how you fleshed them out as well as making a team that is not common like in other fanfics where they start with an eevee or riolu
I really wish for a timeskip because MC is very much ahead compared to his peers. He'll be on the edge. A lot. Because he's illegaly keeping Pokemon. 4 or 5 yrs early? Idk But great writing. Its fun. And I really like the MC's personality. I hope he travels to Hoenn though than to stay in Kanto dominated by team rocket haha
The #1 pokemon fanfic on webnovel and probably in the top 3 of all the pokemon fanfics I've read, just hope you take less time between chapters :( Keep up the good work!
Very good story, excellent plot along with not annoying point of view, semi-realistic perspective. In conclusion an excellent story of Pokémon.
One of the best fanfic on pokemon i read, just i hope there is more release.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally, a story that treats these creatures as animals instead of bright shiny friends that automatically want to be your ally. Wild pokemon in herds for protection, hunter prey dynamics, simply accepting that folks would eat such creatures without hesitation. The character is a tad bit jaded, to be fair, so if you don't like a pessimistic attitude and want sunshine and rainbows I'd recommend you stay clear. Though even with his bristly exterior, he hasn't been a complete monster (See his choices in the last few chapters as of this review). Thank the maker this doesn't seem to be one of those horribly mistranslated works that are a pain in the rear to read. Grammar looks good, on first reading, and there haven't been any moments where I've been confused with sentence structure or intent behind a wording. I'm looking forwards to more, especially to see if this lad starts mellowing out and/or starts to accept more folks into his life. With the large area of locales and plot lines that Pokémon can entail, we have a whole lot of world to explore.
I just wanted to leave my rating, but I was too lazy to write a full review👌 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of the best Pokémon fan fictions I have read so far. based on a realistic Pokémon world with the Pokémon compared to actual monsters.
please friend, give me moresssssss, I give you all my stones but dane moresssssssss................................................................
Pretty nice story, keep it coming. World is well fleshed out and most characters decisions are according to personality.
This is a great Pokémon FF, though it is def more dark and gritty than a normal Pokémon anime/game but its so addicting to read the story I almost forgot to sleep last night since I just binged it,
I wanna be the very best Like no one ever was... Excelent fanfic, darkness of humankind is ever present but the author still makes you laugh every chapter.
Reading status- C47 Its quite a good fic with a somewhat smart mc. Quality is above average among webnovel fics. The girl/pet that he kept for saving his life is quite annoying and should be disposed off but he is giving her wishes even risking his life for a nidoran. She makes empty promises that she will return it but is too stupid to survive in the wild and too naive even with her experience. The world background is also quite underdeveloped till now with only viridian city mentioned. Mc should be made more ruthless and decisive in killing as he grows older. Overall it is a good one.
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Me encantaron tus trabajos por la personalidad de los personajes y tu sentido del humor es genial, pero este es tu mejor trabajo por mucho, me encanta el prota como va lucahndo por su lugar en el mundo y mejora a pasos agigantados pero sigue estando atras con respecto a los grandes tiros del mundo, el mundo frio y hostil en pokemon es genial como lo describes
Your story is fine, but it's too common, most Pokemon fanfics try to show the worst of that world, it's surprising how much dirt they throw at the series, the authors seem to deliberately ignore what makes it popular world, they seem to focus a lot on the manga and the flaws or plot holes. The worst thing is that most of these fanfics are among the most popular and it makes me wonder if the majority of readers have a bad taste for trauma or are simply masochists.
Can you continue this story please, I like the realistic view of the Pokemon world and how he adventures/struggles through survives and thru ing
Abandonado no entrar ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . . ...... . . . . . .
The fanfic is really good in my opinion. It gives the Pokemon world a more realistic view that not a lot of fanfic does. It is easy to follow and understand what is happening and what the MC’s thought pattern is throughout the story. I wish the author would continue the story but it has been 5 months so I ave little hope, which is sad.
this is the worst of all the authors novels, the mc is just a unnecessary serial killer psychopath, no good plot, just bored with how predictable it is cause of how trash the mc is with people even when the people are good
brillant story, terrible development to slow and the guys remained ten through 7 or 8 time skips lasting 3 to 4 months
This fanfiction is really very interesting and I hope you will update the chapters more often This fanfiction is really very interesting and I hope you will update the chapters more often
Author thank you very much for a very interesting story. You did a great job and i am sicerly waiting for continuation. I hope you will some inspiration and will continue the story soon. I am sicerly recomanding this novel for anyone who likes to read Pokémon stories.
I really enjoyed hoy you write about the characters and how you fleshed them out as well as making a team that is not common like in other fanfics where they start with an eevee or riolu
I really wish for a timeskip because MC is very much ahead compared to his peers. He'll be on the edge. A lot. Because he's illegaly keeping Pokemon. 4 or 5 yrs early? Idk But great writing. Its fun. And I really like the MC's personality. I hope he travels to Hoenn though than to stay in Kanto dominated by team rocket haha
The #1 pokemon fanfic on webnovel and probably in the top 3 of all the pokemon fanfics I've read, just hope you take less time between chapters :( Keep up the good work!
Very good story, excellent plot along with not annoying point of view, semi-realistic perspective. In conclusion an excellent story of Pokémon.
One of the best fanfic on pokemon i read, just i hope there is more release.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Finally, a story that treats these creatures as animals instead of bright shiny friends that automatically want to be your ally. Wild pokemon in herds for protection, hunter prey dynamics, simply accepting that folks would eat such creatures without hesitation. The character is a tad bit jaded, to be fair, so if you don't like a pessimistic attitude and want sunshine and rainbows I'd recommend you stay clear. Though even with his bristly exterior, he hasn't been a complete monster (See his choices in the last few chapters as of this review). Thank the maker this doesn't seem to be one of those horribly mistranslated works that are a pain in the rear to read. Grammar looks good, on first reading, and there haven't been any moments where I've been confused with sentence structure or intent behind a wording. I'm looking forwards to more, especially to see if this lad starts mellowing out and/or starts to accept more folks into his life. With the large area of locales and plot lines that Pokémon can entail, we have a whole lot of world to explore.
I just wanted to leave my rating, but I was too lazy to write a full review👌 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
One of the best Pokémon fan fictions I have read so far. based on a realistic Pokémon world with the Pokémon compared to actual monsters.
please friend, give me moresssssss, I give you all my stones but dane moresssssssss................................................................
Pretty nice story, keep it coming. World is well fleshed out and most characters decisions are according to personality.
This is a great Pokémon FF, though it is def more dark and gritty than a normal Pokémon anime/game but its so addicting to read the story I almost forgot to sleep last night since I just binged it,
I wanna be the very best Like no one ever was... Excelent fanfic, darkness of humankind is ever present but the author still makes you laugh every chapter.
Reading status- C47 Its quite a good fic with a somewhat smart mc. Quality is above average among webnovel fics. The girl/pet that he kept for saving his life is quite annoying and should be disposed off but he is giving her wishes even risking his life for a nidoran. She makes empty promises that she will return it but is too stupid to survive in the wild and too naive even with her experience. The world background is also quite underdeveloped till now with only viridian city mentioned. Mc should be made more ruthless and decisive in killing as he grows older. Overall it is a good one.
揭示劇透 Me encantaron tus trabajos por la personalidad de los personajes y tu sentido del humor es genial, pero este es tu mejor trabajo por mucho, me encanta el prota como va lucahndo por su lugar en el mundo y mejora a pasos agigantados pero sigue estando atras con respecto a los grandes tiros del mundo, el mundo frio y hostil en pokemon es genial como lo describes
Good.