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Games workshop is going to touch you if you dont mark this as fan fiction
would be perfect if it focused less on the female characters as in not as all I don't want is a good warhammer fic where they fight chaos you've made this a slice of life harem barely fought anyone strong yet just chillin around starter planet 200 chapters in
This is a blatant rip off of Warhammer 40k. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos. We have already been introduced to the 4 Gods of Chaos which are rip offs of the 40k one i.e. Brutal God = Khorne, Filthy God = Nurgle, God of Lust = Slaanesh, and God of Trickery = Tzeentch. The author also ripped off the Warp and the Psykers, just rebranding them as Subspace and Psychics here. The translation is really good though and the story is interesting but I don't want to pay to read a fanfic.
This story is just a Warhammer 40k fanfiction trying to pass itself off as an original novel. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos and we have already been introduced to the 4 gods of chaos the Brutal god (Khorne) the Filthy god (Nurgle) the god of Lust (Slaanesh) and the god of Trickery Tzeentch we even have Ancient genes (Geneseed) and the one mentioned as an example is the Fallen angel (Sanguinius). I don't hate fanfics in fact I like them but by posting this as an original novel not only does it rip off GW it also means we need to pay to unlock more chapters to read fanfiction and that's what bothers me the most but if you can look pass this fact it's not a bad story so far I just don't want to waste FP or pay for a fanfic.
Quite a fascinating novel, not a genre I normally read but it was in the 10min trial read and looked different so thought, give it a go. Novel is about one ugly SOB who is transmigrated into an online game. Normally it seems this guy plays a petite female character to compensate for his normal features however he appears as himself. His character class of Judge, which reminds me of the movie Judge Dredd, is a rather powerful one. Battle bad guys and fight evil, pretty much stock standard. Still it is a futuristic/fantasy based novel, so we have all the sci-fi power armor, spaceships (think they are called core ships) plus the fantasy races and skills etc. The novel holds a lot of potential and if the author/translator can keep it flowing smoothly, then I can see this being one worth keeping. Worth the read 👍
please, can we have at least one space pirates novel pass through to release, please? there was one cool one about a space pirate collecting waifus but is dropped, can we have this one?
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Games workshop is going to touch you if you dont mark this as fan fiction
would be perfect if it focused less on the female characters as in not as all I don't want is a good warhammer fic where they fight chaos you've made this a slice of life harem barely fought anyone strong yet just chillin around starter planet 200 chapters in
This is a blatant rip off of Warhammer 40k. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos. We have already been introduced to the 4 Gods of Chaos which are rip offs of the 40k one i.e. Brutal God = Khorne, Filthy God = Nurgle, God of Lust = Slaanesh, and God of Trickery = Tzeentch. The author also ripped off the Warp and the Psykers, just rebranding them as Subspace and Psychics here. The translation is really good though and the story is interesting but I don't want to pay to read a fanfic.
This story is just a Warhammer 40k fanfiction trying to pass itself off as an original novel. The MC is a Space Marine Librarian fighting against Chaos and we have already been introduced to the 4 gods of chaos the Brutal god (Khorne) the Filthy god (Nurgle) the god of Lust (Slaanesh) and the god of Trickery Tzeentch we even have Ancient genes (Geneseed) and the one mentioned as an example is the Fallen angel (Sanguinius). I don't hate fanfics in fact I like them but by posting this as an original novel not only does it rip off GW it also means we need to pay to unlock more chapters to read fanfiction and that's what bothers me the most but if you can look pass this fact it's not a bad story so far I just don't want to waste FP or pay for a fanfic.
Quite a fascinating novel, not a genre I normally read but it was in the 10min trial read and looked different so thought, give it a go. Novel is about one ugly SOB who is transmigrated into an online game. Normally it seems this guy plays a petite female character to compensate for his normal features however he appears as himself. His character class of Judge, which reminds me of the movie Judge Dredd, is a rather powerful one. Battle bad guys and fight evil, pretty much stock standard. Still it is a futuristic/fantasy based novel, so we have all the sci-fi power armor, spaceships (think they are called core ships) plus the fantasy races and skills etc. The novel holds a lot of potential and if the author/translator can keep it flowing smoothly, then I can see this being one worth keeping. Worth the read 👍
please, can we have at least one space pirates novel pass through to release, please? there was one cool one about a space pirate collecting waifus but is dropped, can we have this one?
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I didn't like it. The translation is wrong in some points, the style I don't like.
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