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I actually really liked this story!! the only thing is- there's alot of unfinished business with the characters. like Jian going abroad, Wei's (the other girl) baby with Jian's brother and the male actor. it'll be interesting to see a little more about them, their stories and reaction to mc and ml having a baby
I actually really liked this story!! the only thing is- there's alot of unfinished business with the characters. like Jian going abroad, Wei's (the other girl) baby with Jian's brother and the male actor. it'll be interesting to see a little more about them, their stories and reaction to mc and ml having a baby