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I got reborn as the son of Brandon Stark and Allyria Dayne. As the son of Brandon Stark I became the warden of north.
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It's basically a summary of all the typical North development plans. Much of it is conveniently found or discovered in conveniently situated places. The author doesn't do much in terms of trying to make it sound atleast semi believable and as a result, it all feels rather... Distant. I don't dislike the fic tough. It's okay. You're just better off reading other fics first, because they'll be written at a higher quality and be better thought out. I rated this on the technical points given by webnovel to rate. If I were to rate it for my like or dislike of the story then I'd say none availeble yet because nothing really happened in these first 5 chapters beyond a summary and thus there's little to be enthralled by
For the love of God, please don't to a harem. Speaking from experience the most memorable fanifcs are one's that aren't harems. (sigh)You could do so much better.
good concept. hope you won't abandon the story like so many have. best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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a harem in the world of game of thrones is already a failure and with a high probability it will be a failure since I have read a lot of stories about this universe and if the main character has more than 2 girls, something good rarely comes out of it, I have seen only a few stories out of several hundred I have read
Couldn't you give a dornish or Northern name? I mean Sephiroth don't really fit a Stark or anyone else. Hopefully you won't do a Haren,...........
Good so far. excited to see how it goes. Good so far. excited to see how it goes.Good so far. excited to see how it goes.Good so far. excited to see how it goes.
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another great GoT fanfic even having 6chapters is hyping enough . coming from my perspective a free readers your novel is going great fast phase but still great .. I'm hoping for more chapters to read .. praying for your good mental health 👌😊👍
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