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Worst crossover in the history of crossover 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
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Honestly, interesting story, please continue it, even if it is not logical but this idea is very cool, however I would prefer if Mihawk was born in house Stark as second or eldest son .
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Having haki in the game of thrones is okayish atleast you will just jump up the physical prowess level of the combatants but you include the devil fruit which complicated everything now it looks dead end if you only wish for something more helpful in a medieval era like crafting or farming dimension something like that it will be better
The way you have infused Haki into game of thrones is amazing it really makes the story so much more and makes the already perfect world of G.O.T so much better with One piece lore, Please don't drop this
I generally found this book very interesting, and it's a great idea and is done very well
Honestly a new and cool idea to the story is devil fruits. I haven’t read similar stories about devil fruits in the GOT world, and I think that this concept works well. Perhaps make it so that the Targaryens don’t get destroyed. And/or make it so that there are a few Noble houses with devil fruits because if a small house like “Mormont” has a fruit, I’d assumed they’d get attacked or killed to prevent the “threat”.
Love this already but don't make Mihawk use his devil fruit unless he's in a bad situation, but I like the idea and I hope you complete this fanfic.
This could go either very bad or very good. Matter of fact most people might read it cause the character MC chose is out of the world. Tbh planetos is too small for mihawks adventure. Would have loved it if he was a self insert in one piece world itself. Anyways good luck hope it's works out.
For the world of game of thrones, the main character will be very strong, and the story will be, as it seems to me, either in the style of building a kingdom, or more likely it will be a simple conquest of the world, well, any story has the right to life, and it will be quite fun for many to read something in the genre of might versus intrigue.
Shameless mandatory 5 star from the author. First time writing a fan fic. 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾.
Why is this rated so lonely? This is way better than 3.9 stars. He basically created another world. Characters are interesting. The pacing can be a bit off. But overall five stars here’s a review to keep you going.
Worst crossover in the history of crossover 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀
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Honestly, interesting story, please continue it, even if it is not logical but this idea is very cool, however I would prefer if Mihawk was born in house Stark as second or eldest son .
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Having haki in the game of thrones is okayish atleast you will just jump up the physical prowess level of the combatants but you include the devil fruit which complicated everything now it looks dead end if you only wish for something more helpful in a medieval era like crafting or farming dimension something like that it will be better
The way you have infused Haki into game of thrones is amazing it really makes the story so much more and makes the already perfect world of G.O.T so much better with One piece lore, Please don't drop this
I generally found this book very interesting, and it's a great idea and is done very well
Honestly a new and cool idea to the story is devil fruits. I haven’t read similar stories about devil fruits in the GOT world, and I think that this concept works well. Perhaps make it so that the Targaryens don’t get destroyed. And/or make it so that there are a few Noble houses with devil fruits because if a small house like “Mormont” has a fruit, I’d assumed they’d get attacked or killed to prevent the “threat”.
Love this already but don't make Mihawk use his devil fruit unless he's in a bad situation, but I like the idea and I hope you complete this fanfic.
This could go either very bad or very good. Matter of fact most people might read it cause the character MC chose is out of the world. Tbh planetos is too small for mihawks adventure. Would have loved it if he was a self insert in one piece world itself. Anyways good luck hope it's works out.
For the world of game of thrones, the main character will be very strong, and the story will be, as it seems to me, either in the style of building a kingdom, or more likely it will be a simple conquest of the world, well, any story has the right to life, and it will be quite fun for many to read something in the genre of might versus intrigue.
Shameless mandatory 5 star from the author. First time writing a fan fic. 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾.
Why is this rated so lonely? This is way better than 3.9 stars. He basically created another world. Characters are interesting. The pacing can be a bit off. But overall five stars here’s a review to keep you going.