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I really like the start and the concept, I'll just rate 5 stars and see where you'll go with this. Remember that you can't please anyone so there's bound to be some hate in the future. Good luck and have fan writing. *Filler* apology for poor england when were you when queen elizibith dies? i was sat at home eating beans on toast when telly ring ‘queen is kill’ ‘no’
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