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I would like to thank you, author, i'm really enjoying the story, it's amazing, i hope you keep writing and publishing............................................................................................................................................................
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A história está muito boa,fora algumas inconsistências no personagem está tudo muito bom,eu queria algumas dicas de histórias parecidas com essa por quê eu gostei muito dessa história
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Like any other shameless author, I come to give 5 stars and out of greed, say that if you want to read additional chapters, become my supporter on Pa**eon (** = tr), go to the synopsis, the link will be there! As for the posts, due to each chapter having at least 5,000 words, which is equivalent to 4~5 chapters of a work with medium chapters (length), I will be posting 2 chapters per week, on weekends.
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揭示劇透 I would like to thank you, author, i'm really enjoying the story, it's amazing, i hope you keep writing and publishing............................................................................................................................................................
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揭示劇透 A história está muito boa,fora algumas inconsistências no personagem está tudo muito bom,eu queria algumas dicas de histórias parecidas com essa por quê eu gostei muito dessa história
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揭示劇透 Like any other shameless author, I come to give 5 stars and out of greed, say that if you want to read additional chapters, become my supporter on Pa**eon (** = tr), go to the synopsis, the link will be there! As for the posts, due to each chapter having at least 5,000 words, which is equivalent to 4~5 chapters of a work with medium chapters (length), I will be posting 2 chapters per week, on weekends.
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揭示劇透