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Incredible, impressive, and entertaining! I never imagined that i would finish reading the fanfic. This is a masterpiece! I would have rated it higher if not for the inconsistent spelling of name and gender. I love how the story worked out in the end. Thank you for creating this fanfic <3!
Its great. aside from the translation, and some questions left unanswered, Its still one of the entertaining novels I've read. [img=recommend]
I know that I can make the effort to understand when the man character switches from Ivan to Yvonne and then everything switches to female pronouns... but I'm just not OK with doing this gymnastique every single chapters.. no checks reading after translation nothing ... so dropped it
O principal ponto negativo é a tradução para o inglês, é muito, muito ruim. Fora isso, eu gostei, é uma fanfic divertida e expande algumas temáticas de HP de uma forma interessante e inventiva, o arco final foi levemente rushado, mas gostei muito de fugir do "padrão" das fanfics. Recomendo a leitura, mas com a ressalva de que a tradução é tão ruim que às vezes você se arrepende de ter começado a ler.
I really liked this , it was very enjoyable and exciting in the beginning although the plot twists decreased after the fourth arc, the story remained good, the end was also satisfying enough, it is a very good experience, I recommend it if you wanted HP fan-fic
My biggest tip while read was I brainwashed myself into thinking the mc name was “Ivan Yvonne Hals” this way I was able to read and stay satisfied
Although there are issues with the nouns and pronouns from time to time, once you get used to it, there's no confusion. The novel itself is great. No qualms.
I have read about 700 chapters of the novel and unfortunately the main character is hesitant and stupid without the relationship with Hera as he seems like a sheep without any personality and accepts people's condemnation of him and accepts to go with the herd like a sheep literally and let's not forget his fear and cowardice of killing dark magicians and his fear of practicing dark arts and the uselessness of the system as he merged three types of blood of magical creatures and he is still weak simply a failed novel that does not achieve any goal. It is only useful in case of wasting time on something you do not enjoy
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🤨😆
as they said,it requires a lot of mental capacity to understand who was talking/thinking at the moment but it also pushes the reader to really understand what was being said both literally and figuratively. thanks for the great read and this made me appreciate the books and movies more!
Wonderful story to read. Thanks for writing it. It's a type of time travel story with a system which can be understood once you read it. Also, in the middle pages, Alicia dies...but, don't be sad as that's not true and complete picture
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Amazing story. Too bad the translation is not the best. Would totally re-read it if it got fixed
Name translation and associated pronouns, and sometimes their titles (like sir or madam) keep flipping from masculine to feminine and back. I stopped giving feedback on it after 5 chapters and just sat back to comment on story development. despite the inconsistent names, i liked the story development, altho this story replaces Harry as the protagonist. i also agreed with the character analysis of Harry and Ron. Remove the hero halo and they are weak characters who were just lucky in the original work. Hermione truly shines in this story as a good support. and surprisingly Malfoy appears as a tsundere type! wow. didnt see that coming.
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This story is one of the best fiction up hp and It's a complete story as well as a good enough background to all characters.
Great novel. if not for chinese tralnslation it world be close to perfection. highly recomend and i wish the readers have patience with tralnslation
Overall really good. There was some slight issues with the chamber of secrets section and I was a little annoyed that we never found out what his last bloodline ended up being.
The story flow wasn't the worst, however, over coming the translation issues and the constant back and fourth can be jarring. While i was interested to continue reading it, I just couldn't get past that translation
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horrible. first words are used to get susan bones name wrong a known fanon character who is everything form longbotoms wife to heir of hufflepuff.
Es la primera vez que leo un fic que la pareja del ML es Hermione, me gusto y fue sencillo. Se debe aclarar que tener a Harry e Ivan como protas en la historia del mundo mágico le quito lo entretenido y se volvió algo forzado, al igual que el trato que hizo el anciano de Dumbledore y Geller, me pareció muy fuera de lugar por parte del anciano. La traducción es un 3/5 mucha confusión con los nombres de los personajes. Dejando de lado todo lo que señale, es una buena historia que te hará querer emparejar a luna con ivan.
Incredible, impressive, and entertaining! I never imagined that i would finish reading the fanfic. This is a masterpiece! I would have rated it higher if not for the inconsistent spelling of name and gender. I love how the story worked out in the end. Thank you for creating this fanfic <3!
Its great. aside from the translation, and some questions left unanswered, Its still one of the entertaining novels I've read. [img=recommend]
I know that I can make the effort to understand when the man character switches from Ivan to Yvonne and then everything switches to female pronouns... but I'm just not OK with doing this gymnastique every single chapters.. no checks reading after translation nothing ... so dropped it
O principal ponto negativo é a tradução para o inglês, é muito, muito ruim. Fora isso, eu gostei, é uma fanfic divertida e expande algumas temáticas de HP de uma forma interessante e inventiva, o arco final foi levemente rushado, mas gostei muito de fugir do "padrão" das fanfics. Recomendo a leitura, mas com a ressalva de que a tradução é tão ruim que às vezes você se arrepende de ter começado a ler.
I really liked this , it was very enjoyable and exciting in the beginning although the plot twists decreased after the fourth arc, the story remained good, the end was also satisfying enough, it is a very good experience, I recommend it if you wanted HP fan-fic
My biggest tip while read was I brainwashed myself into thinking the mc name was “Ivan Yvonne Hals” this way I was able to read and stay satisfied
Although there are issues with the nouns and pronouns from time to time, once you get used to it, there's no confusion. The novel itself is great. No qualms.
I have read about 700 chapters of the novel and unfortunately the main character is hesitant and stupid without the relationship with Hera as he seems like a sheep without any personality and accepts people's condemnation of him and accepts to go with the herd like a sheep literally and let's not forget his fear and cowardice of killing dark magicians and his fear of practicing dark arts and the uselessness of the system as he merged three types of blood of magical creatures and he is still weak simply a failed novel that does not achieve any goal. It is only useful in case of wasting time on something you do not enjoy
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🤨😆
as they said,it requires a lot of mental capacity to understand who was talking/thinking at the moment but it also pushes the reader to really understand what was being said both literally and figuratively. thanks for the great read and this made me appreciate the books and movies more!
Wonderful story to read. Thanks for writing it. It's a type of time travel story with a system which can be understood once you read it. Also, in the middle pages, Alicia dies...but, don't be sad as that's not true and complete picture
揭示劇透 Amazing story. Too bad the translation is not the best. Would totally re-read it if it got fixed
Name translation and associated pronouns, and sometimes their titles (like sir or madam) keep flipping from masculine to feminine and back. I stopped giving feedback on it after 5 chapters and just sat back to comment on story development. despite the inconsistent names, i liked the story development, altho this story replaces Harry as the protagonist. i also agreed with the character analysis of Harry and Ron. Remove the hero halo and they are weak characters who were just lucky in the original work. Hermione truly shines in this story as a good support. and surprisingly Malfoy appears as a tsundere type! wow. didnt see that coming.
揭示劇透 This story is one of the best fiction up hp and It's a complete story as well as a good enough background to all characters.
Great novel. if not for chinese tralnslation it world be close to perfection. highly recomend and i wish the readers have patience with tralnslation
Overall really good. There was some slight issues with the chamber of secrets section and I was a little annoyed that we never found out what his last bloodline ended up being.
The story flow wasn't the worst, however, over coming the translation issues and the constant back and fourth can be jarring. While i was interested to continue reading it, I just couldn't get past that translation
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horrible. first words are used to get susan bones name wrong a known fanon character who is everything form longbotoms wife to heir of hufflepuff.
Es la primera vez que leo un fic que la pareja del ML es Hermione, me gusto y fue sencillo. Se debe aclarar que tener a Harry e Ivan como protas en la historia del mundo mágico le quito lo entretenido y se volvió algo forzado, al igual que el trato que hizo el anciano de Dumbledore y Geller, me pareció muy fuera de lugar por parte del anciano. La traducción es un 3/5 mucha confusión con los nombres de los personajes. Dejando de lado todo lo que señale, es una buena historia que te hará querer emparejar a luna con ivan.