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The premise seems interesting but this is incomprehensible. This is just taken from MTL with no edits or any effort.
Ok, this whole storyline is amazing. It has a unique quality, where the Mc is basically the cautious hero that's stupidly overpowered, finding like-minded individuals who can only marvel at his OVER THE TOP Cation that he displays to the world around him while keeping up of the facade of an honest and righteous marine who only got lucky, or fought with all his might to only faint but leave his opponent in a miserable state so his colleagues can take the credit. Only to unfortunately get promoted, do to those who believe in his humble and noble character deserves such recognition and status. Most unfortunately, though the fact that this is MTL means the writing quality and Chinese paraphrasing leaves us with hot-mess of butchered names, places, along with grammar issues, and yes, as always, Chinese interpretation on multitude of subjects that others won't understand. Overall, this story has unlimited potential but needs a better editor and translation or just needs a whole new structure for an American and European cultural standpoint or just crop out cultural differences in its entirety and stick to the One Piece worlds expletives and cultural references to give it a natural feel. Please edit this possible masterpiece.
Cant say i didnt try, my eyes hurt so badly now that i regret being so moronic and easy to bait Saw one piece and started reading without seeing the other reviews first
Translation quality is worst than most mtls. Liked the idea, but too bad its difficult to read. Don't bother reading this. Its waste of time
trash another canon rehash, the author made a lot of stupid decision just to follow the plot, he can easily kill rayleigh and he didn't even after warning him not to help luffy and when rayleigh help luffy goes to new world the mc still did nothing to rayleigh and he goes to new world and just follow the plot nothing new
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dropped it because dude really wrote East China Sea, i may not be and avid reader of OP but i know there's no East China Sea in OP
this is pretty much just a canon rehash with just a new mc if you like to reminisce the story of op but with a different mc then this is for you
The translation is average. The constant changing of names is really annoying but not the main problem. What annoys me the most is that characters don't stay in character. Constantly changing to fit the situation. I haven't seen enough One Piece to know if it's One Piece or this fanfic but the random drama is so bloody annoying. So many cockroaches crawling out of the woodwork all the time, too.
I read the completed version of this FF. It is a Chinese FF of One Piece. MC is op , ruthless and cunning. No harem, MC only have one wife in the final chapter. The story is good , comedic and full of great fight scenes.
As a veteran MTL reader. I'll try this dish to see if it's a poison or not by using my Automatic Brain Translation[ABT, hope it would work.
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this is not original its fanfic one piece. all i can say is this....each chapter is full of chinese nationalism and you can tell that they hate americans.
it's MTL, so bad grammar and very confusing. the basic idea doesn't seem bad though I would probably read it if it was properly translated. I struggled through the first 2 chapters.
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I don't know if this is a translation or your an author. I have never been so thoroughly confused about a single character. You have each character with a different name and yet they all share the same name as 3 other characters just for them to change once again. Again I don't care if your a translator or author, you need to have a basic understanding of a language to write a story. Even if that means Chinese or English, at least know the language.
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Great novel overall. Lots of comical events mixed with the plot. Highly recommend.
The premise seems interesting but this is incomprehensible. This is just taken from MTL with no edits or any effort.
Ok, this whole storyline is amazing. It has a unique quality, where the Mc is basically the cautious hero that's stupidly overpowered, finding like-minded individuals who can only marvel at his OVER THE TOP Cation that he displays to the world around him while keeping up of the facade of an honest and righteous marine who only got lucky, or fought with all his might to only faint but leave his opponent in a miserable state so his colleagues can take the credit. Only to unfortunately get promoted, do to those who believe in his humble and noble character deserves such recognition and status. Most unfortunately, though the fact that this is MTL means the writing quality and Chinese paraphrasing leaves us with hot-mess of butchered names, places, along with grammar issues, and yes, as always, Chinese interpretation on multitude of subjects that others won't understand. Overall, this story has unlimited potential but needs a better editor and translation or just needs a whole new structure for an American and European cultural standpoint or just crop out cultural differences in its entirety and stick to the One Piece worlds expletives and cultural references to give it a natural feel. Please edit this possible masterpiece.
Cant say i didnt try, my eyes hurt so badly now that i regret being so moronic and easy to bait Saw one piece and started reading without seeing the other reviews first
Translation quality is worst than most mtls. Liked the idea, but too bad its difficult to read. Don't bother reading this. Its waste of time
trash another canon rehash, the author made a lot of stupid decision just to follow the plot, he can easily kill rayleigh and he didn't even after warning him not to help luffy and when rayleigh help luffy goes to new world the mc still did nothing to rayleigh and he goes to new world and just follow the plot nothing new
Fic chinês padrão de desligar o celebro [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
dropped it because dude really wrote East China Sea, i may not be and avid reader of OP but i know there's no East China Sea in OP
this is pretty much just a canon rehash with just a new mc if you like to reminisce the story of op but with a different mc then this is for you
The translation is average. The constant changing of names is really annoying but not the main problem. What annoys me the most is that characters don't stay in character. Constantly changing to fit the situation. I haven't seen enough One Piece to know if it's One Piece or this fanfic but the random drama is so bloody annoying. So many cockroaches crawling out of the woodwork all the time, too.
I read the completed version of this FF. It is a Chinese FF of One Piece. MC is op , ruthless and cunning. No harem, MC only have one wife in the final chapter. The story is good , comedic and full of great fight scenes.
As a veteran MTL reader. I'll try this dish to see if it's a poison or not by using my Automatic Brain Translation[ABT, hope it would work.
good story, need more plsssss [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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this is not original its fanfic one piece. all i can say is this....each chapter is full of chinese nationalism and you can tell that they hate americans.
it's MTL, so bad grammar and very confusing. the basic idea doesn't seem bad though I would probably read it if it was properly translated. I struggled through the first 2 chapters.
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I don't know if this is a translation or your an author. I have never been so thoroughly confused about a single character. You have each character with a different name and yet they all share the same name as 3 other characters just for them to change once again. Again I don't care if your a translator or author, you need to have a basic understanding of a language to write a story. Even if that means Chinese or English, at least know the language.
? ?? ?? ?? ? this come from original webnovel? and it a fanfic? what is going on here? zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzcvbhjjiugghyuijhyujjiiooiiiuuu0
Great novel overall. Lots of comical events mixed with the plot. Highly recommend.