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It a good fan fic. Keep it up. I won't spoil but the starter of the Mc is amazing and unique. The only problem i had was the tournament. With the ability he has the Pokemon he chose, especially in the later stages were quite strange. This is only the overall rating as of now. I can't wait to see how the story will develop.
great stuff keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀😁😂🤣😃😄😅😆😉😊😋😎😍😘🥰😗😙😚☺️🙂🤗🤩🤔🤨😐😑😶🙄😏😣😥😮🤐😯😪😫😴😌😛😜😝🤤😒😓😔😕🙃🤑😲☹🙁😖😞😟😤😢😭😦😧😨😩🤯😬😰😱🥵🥶😳🤪😵😡😠🤬😷🤒🤕🤢🤮🤧😇🤠🥳🥴🥺🤥🤫🤭🧐🤓☻😈👿🤡👹
I like the story if you continue like this I could help you you just have to update it often I think you should do it 3 or 4 chapters per week
Its a really good story and its kind of a fresh start after reading same type of novels over and over, the author takes into account the realism that should be in a pokemon world, and if the choice of the starter pokemon by the protagonist is any indication then it is not going to be just another run in the mill novel, Just a request that out of first six pokemon atlest make four of those some pokemon that have been not been used by writers. like snover, spinarak, alolan geodude etc. waiting for the next chapter
It a good fan fic. Keep it up. I won't spoil but the starter of the Mc is amazing and unique. The only problem i had was the tournament. With the ability he has the Pokemon he chose, especially in the later stages were quite strange. This is only the overall rating as of now. I can't wait to see how the story will develop.
great stuff keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀😁😂🤣😃😄😅😆😉😊😋😎😍😘🥰😗😙😚☺️🙂🤗🤩🤔🤨😐😑😶🙄😏😣😥😮🤐😯😪😫😴😌😛😜😝🤤😒😓😔😕🙃🤑😲☹🙁😖😞😟😤😢😭😦😧😨😩🤯😬😰😱🥵🥶😳🤪😵😡😠🤬😷🤒🤕🤢🤮🤧😇🤠🥳🥴🥺🤥🤫🤭🧐🤓☻😈👿🤡👹
I like the story if you continue like this I could help you you just have to update it often I think you should do it 3 or 4 chapters per week
Its a really good story and its kind of a fresh start after reading same type of novels over and over, the author takes into account the realism that should be in a pokemon world, and if the choice of the starter pokemon by the protagonist is any indication then it is not going to be just another run in the mill novel, Just a request that out of first six pokemon atlest make four of those some pokemon that have been not been used by writers. like snover, spinarak, alolan geodude etc. waiting for the next chapter