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It has a good potential. Don't ever give up writing. I will be one of your first fans. So don't give up! Just like Naruto who didn't give up even when he's fighting a god.
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寫檢討It has a good potential. Don't ever give up writing. I will be one of your first fans. So don't give up! Just like Naruto who didn't give up even when he's fighting a god.
It has a good potential. Don't ever give up writing. I will be one of your first fans. So don't give up! Just like Naruto who didn't give up even when he's fighting a god.