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The story was good, as I love to read medical stories like this, but gurl your paragraph was too long as if you were writing a letter or a report😂, try to shorten them. Yeah the first chapter was captivating enough to hook me up until the second one but I can't read further because busy somewhere else, but definitely gonna add it to the library. Good luck with the next chapter😊
This story is awesome. The plot is interesting and so is the world building. A lot of good information about hospitals and medical. Good story keep it up
very good going .need to look for more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
nice work ...good story..[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i enjoyed reading it...it's good ...i can't wait to read further ..[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I must say it's really amazing . So[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good. The theme is excellent. I don't know why it is not popular yet. Guys give it a try.. It's good
love the story. .. goot job iread it in one go [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]waiting for the next episode
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good ..[img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story was good, as I love to read medical stories like this, but gurl your paragraph was too long as if you were writing a letter or a report😂, try to shorten them. Yeah the first chapter was captivating enough to hook me up until the second one but I can't read further because busy somewhere else, but definitely gonna add it to the library. Good luck with the next chapter😊
This story is awesome. The plot is interesting and so is the world building. A lot of good information about hospitals and medical. Good story keep it up
very good going .need to look for more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
nice work ...good story..[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
i enjoyed reading it...it's good ...i can't wait to read further ..[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I must say it's really amazing . So[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good. The theme is excellent. I don't know why it is not popular yet. Guys give it a try.. It's good
love the story. .. goot job iread it in one go [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]waiting for the next episode
揭示劇透 good ..[img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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very good novel i like it very much 👍👍👍👍