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ı wısh harem but this novel awesome ...................... ..,jllylylykyl5l4ı4jjrfljtbrktjtktkkkfkfjtk
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A Very Interesting Novel I am quite interested on how the story will develop, please don't drop the fic it has huge potential, always have been a fan on the Riodianverse and it has been a while since i read his works but your fic has reignited that childish flames of curiosity in our worlds myths and legends and its take is beautiful so please continue with this work of art because I will love to see the end of the up and coming masterpiece.
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actual 5 star book would read again only downside hasn't been updated in 28 days when it was updating updated every day or week can't remeber
I liked the beginning of the novel but lost interest when it went the cliche “kill all the gods” and “power over everything” route. If you want to read about a discount kraits than be my guest.
I've never had a story grab my attention from the first paragraph before. Your writing and use of words is mesmerising and almost, hypnotic. I've never read the Percy Jackson stories but that didn't curb my enjoyment of the story at all. Your character building and story development skills while respecting the original world and lore is top tier. I wish you luck in your future writing and I look forward to your works.
I think the main character is getting OP to quickly but other then that the development is amazing I can't help but wonder what he will do next
this story is simply amazing, and the best part of it : NO HAREM, it's why I started reading it in the first place, I'm really looking forward to volume 2, please no matter what anyone or anything says, don't drop this..now if y'all excuse me, imma start reading it again from the beginning
I'm not really far in, but it's good till now and the author is asking for a review, so he gets one!
Good story, something that a lot of PJO fans would like to read and even myself partway through the story. That said, it's not really my cup of tea. It personally seems to me that he's not really grown as a person in spite of knowing how his life has been turning out and has pretty much remained stagnant. Ironic since as a human he should always be changing and bettering himself, but at the end of the day, he'll strive to be no better than the Greek Gods themselves.
Very good story so far, my only complaint is the length of the chapters and the unnecessary flooding of p atreon supporters at the end of every chapter. It's not word filling but it makes the chapters a LOT shorter.
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A little general knowledge . There is no real difference between Hercules and Heracles. Both refer to the famous hero in Greek and Roman mythology. Heracles is a Greek name, while Hercules is a Roman name.
I love the premise and the MC and I can't wait to read more, I am so hyped for this.
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Very promising content. Certainly one of the good fanfics on this platform. Writing quality and more importantly grammar is good. Keep up the good work.
Hey there! Author here. I have to say that I am quite excited because I've been wanting to write this for a long time. Percy Jackson was what got me into greek mythology and I have to say that I've loved it ever since. I shall try to do justice to the works of Uncle Rick but I will indeed try to include my own twists. Anyhoo, hope you enjoy the story.
ı wısh harem but this novel awesome ...................... ..,jllylylykyl5l4ı4jjrfljtbrktjtktkkkfkfjtk
It was a Great Reading ....................................................................................................................................................
more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please more chapters please
A Very Interesting Novel I am quite interested on how the story will develop, please don't drop the fic it has huge potential, always have been a fan on the Riodianverse and it has been a while since i read his works but your fic has reignited that childish flames of curiosity in our worlds myths and legends and its take is beautiful so please continue with this work of art because I will love to see the end of the up and coming masterpiece.
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actual 5 star book would read again only downside hasn't been updated in 28 days when it was updating updated every day or week can't remeber
I liked the beginning of the novel but lost interest when it went the cliche “kill all the gods” and “power over everything” route. If you want to read about a discount kraits than be my guest.
I've never had a story grab my attention from the first paragraph before. Your writing and use of words is mesmerising and almost, hypnotic. I've never read the Percy Jackson stories but that didn't curb my enjoyment of the story at all. Your character building and story development skills while respecting the original world and lore is top tier. I wish you luck in your future writing and I look forward to your works.
I think the main character is getting OP to quickly but other then that the development is amazing I can't help but wonder what he will do next
this story is simply amazing, and the best part of it : NO HAREM, it's why I started reading it in the first place, I'm really looking forward to volume 2, please no matter what anyone or anything says, don't drop this..now if y'all excuse me, imma start reading it again from the beginning
I'm not really far in, but it's good till now and the author is asking for a review, so he gets one!
Good story, something that a lot of PJO fans would like to read and even myself partway through the story. That said, it's not really my cup of tea. It personally seems to me that he's not really grown as a person in spite of knowing how his life has been turning out and has pretty much remained stagnant. Ironic since as a human he should always be changing and bettering himself, but at the end of the day, he'll strive to be no better than the Greek Gods themselves.
Very good story so far, my only complaint is the length of the chapters and the unnecessary flooding of p atreon supporters at the end of every chapter. It's not word filling but it makes the chapters a LOT shorter.
esta bueno :D ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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A little general knowledge . There is no real difference between Hercules and Heracles. Both refer to the famous hero in Greek and Roman mythology. Heracles is a Greek name, while Hercules is a Roman name.
I love the premise and the MC and I can't wait to read more, I am so hyped for this.
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Very promising content. Certainly one of the good fanfics on this platform. Writing quality and more importantly grammar is good. Keep up the good work.
Hey there! Author here. I have to say that I am quite excited because I've been wanting to write this for a long time. Percy Jackson was what got me into greek mythology and I have to say that I've loved it ever since. I shall try to do justice to the works of Uncle Rick but I will indeed try to include my own twists. Anyhoo, hope you enjoy the story.