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Imagine yourself standing in front of a pool, all excited and jump in! You should have reached the bottom of the pool in mere seconds, but find yourself sinking deeper and deeper. That's what this story seems to be for the MC. Joe Ga could have opened a repair shop with the Universal Toolbox, but nooo. He had to start a dangerous adventure in Africa lol. The story itself isn't bad, with Africa misspelled 99% of the time.
Imagine yourself standing in front of a pool, all excited and jump in! You should have reached the bottom of the pool in mere seconds, but find yourself sinking deeper and deeper. That's what this story seems to be for the MC. Joe Ga could have opened a repair shop with the Universal Toolbox, but nooo. He had to start a dangerous adventure in Africa lol. The story itself isn't bad, with Africa misspelled 99% of the time.