章節 78: Carin's Thoughts
The major cities of Oto were clumped together close enough so that their supplementary barriers could support the main one around the capital. The surroundings consisted of wetlands that had been turned into rice paddies– a staple food of the country, and stretched out into simple marshes. The further you got from civilization, the more the landscape devolved back to its default state of dense foliage and forestry. Rune and his party had been moving through one such area for about half a day now, and the sun was beginning to set.
"Let's stop here for today," Carin said, halting her run and stopping at a clearing in the forest. She glanced back at Rune, who began to pant heavily after putting Luna down, and he was clearly exhausted. Even if they wanted to continue at this point, it just wouldn't be feasible.
"Haah haah haah." Long, heavy breaths escaped Rune's mouth as his lungs struggled for air
"Are you okay, Rune?" Luna asked, cupping his cheeks worriedly.
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Tasty_Dragon Phew. I spent all day yesterday thinking of what to write next. I seem to really struggle with transitions. Like whenever a battle is done or a certain sequence of events is finished. I think this chapter turned out pretty well, though, and I was able to lay the groundwork for where I want the story to go next.
What did you think of the short gathering and cooking sequence? I thought it would be cool to show those skills being put to use since it was something that had been mentioned back at the academy. Do you guys enjoy small details and scenes like that being included? Let me know.
I'm trying my best not to include any unnecessary padding and making sure everything is relevant to the story.
Anyways, the next chapter will probably be on Tuesday, like the past few weeks. Be sure to vote and comment any thoughts you may have. I'm always open to suggestions and criticism.
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