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One mc too stupid pseudo moral skeleton. Classic dungeon monster that want to be friend so sad. And no brain no magic only sword and punch. Sorry it's not my cup of tea
I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.
I am just at the twelve chapter, but for me twelve was enough to do a review so here it is. first, I love the idea of an human to become a skeleton, its the first time I read something like it Second, the description is enough for me to imagine the character and the scene. thirth, sometime there a "amil" instead of Kyle, write where the name of the MC belongs. Fourth, I suggest this book for everyone( if you love this type of storie of course. Fifth, continue your hard work Author.
Good weak-to-strong storyline. I like that the main character doesn't stumble into a giant level boost or overpowered item and seems to actually work for improvements. Any editing mistakes are minor and far better than the vast majority of writers on Webnovel. I feel like the world building is growing slowly but steadily and appreciate the lack of blatant exposition. Great start and looking forward to more. [img=recommend]
A nice story with dungeon developement and ally making. 4 Stars from me Just read it when it is your typ of novel - development and fantasy
I have been reading this story for some time now and I feel like I need more! I am loving the grow of the characters and especially the growth of the dungeon. I want to read more but now I have reached the barrier… can’t wait for what’s coming in the future!
One mc too stupid pseudo moral skeleton. Classic dungeon monster that want to be friend so sad. And no brain no magic only sword and punch. Sorry it's not my cup of tea
I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.I hope the author continues with this wonderful novel.
I am just at the twelve chapter, but for me twelve was enough to do a review so here it is. first, I love the idea of an human to become a skeleton, its the first time I read something like it Second, the description is enough for me to imagine the character and the scene. thirth, sometime there a "amil" instead of Kyle, write where the name of the MC belongs. Fourth, I suggest this book for everyone( if you love this type of storie of course. Fifth, continue your hard work Author.
Good weak-to-strong storyline. I like that the main character doesn't stumble into a giant level boost or overpowered item and seems to actually work for improvements. Any editing mistakes are minor and far better than the vast majority of writers on Webnovel. I feel like the world building is growing slowly but steadily and appreciate the lack of blatant exposition. Great start and looking forward to more. [img=recommend]
A nice story with dungeon developement and ally making. 4 Stars from me Just read it when it is your typ of novel - development and fantasy
I have been reading this story for some time now and I feel like I need more! I am loving the grow of the characters and especially the growth of the dungeon. I want to read more but now I have reached the barrier… can’t wait for what’s coming in the future!