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DogLickerGods

There are some people who ask if this is an Original Fanfic or MTL? I will answer that this is my own Original Fanfic. You can search for this fanfic on the Chinese website or MTL nation and you won't find it. However, you will find some books that have the same inner voice genre as my fanfic, although the story is obviously different from mine because my fanfic has Highschool Dxd and other series in it.

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Farhan1998

Is it dropped or what Its been a year since you last updated it ?

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GupGodLicker

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6mth
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Habib_Isbahani

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6mth
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ShirleyShiroe

When will this continue, it's actually good, you know!

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8mth
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Jiang2219

please update more chapters is really a good novel

8mth
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DollShururu

A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.

9mth
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HorizonWanderer

hey man , update new chapters . it's an interesting fiction

9mth
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DDH
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Complaining about Issei for being perverted in an anime that his fans were waiting for the blu-ray to see uncensored... I don't know if you see the irony It feels like the author wrote a story without knowing the base story or even looking at a wiki. I can only define this story as a FanFic of a FanFic.

9mth
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SinaelDOverom

If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".

10mth
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whyexist

kinda leaving luke warm review here because I am interested in this work but he seems to be active in his another works even though it would have been good If he droped a chapter here and there but here we are half of the story half my heart broken and half my time wasted

1yr
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Lutz_
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black_soul_3041

Is this going to be continued just asking?

1yr
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J0s3_Angel

A very good story based on the world of the DXD, the pace of the story seems appropriate, and the development of relationships between the characters seems a bit fast to me, but with a detailed explanation of why. The protagonist is very good and personally, I am satisfied with his performance and attitude.

1yr
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DaoistyQNGiX

Multiple reincarnated/transmigrated characters… one of the few “rules” that you are never supposed to break. Waste of time reading.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc chinese Mc pathetic [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

1yr
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Krishna_Mondal_2235

I like this novel very much I hope author contuinue this novel.

1yr
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DaddyCarvz

This story is amazing. But is this dropped??

1yr
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Nezuko_Dragneel

author, when will you continue this novel of yours, thank you

1yr
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ThriceRecklessSong

I enjoyed this greatly. But can only reach 3 stars due to author's long and repeated rants about yuri, polyamory and his weak mental state. As well as mtl like writing imo.

1yr
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Coala_Voador

Unfortunately I finished reading it in 2 days, I wanted more chapters. I will read author's recommendation now villain eavesdropping heroines

1yr
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Drake50s

Been awhile since I throughly enjoyed a book

1yr
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TheRedHood

I like it don't really care if you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜♥️♥️♥️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇

1yr
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kokishorttail

Great concept, and I personally love the story, the only problem for me is the bad grammer so I cant really bring myself to finish this, but if you don’t mind bad grammer I would seriously recommend this novel to you.

1yr
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DaoistFiZTje

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Craterzech3

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1yr
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SHIROMIYA_21

Please new chapter I've Been waiting ❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
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StevenKazuto

Jaaaa ya estoy al dia Definitivamente es bueno La comedia de por medio siempre me mantiene una sonrisa en la cara Aunque voy a extrañarlo por el tiempo entre actualizaciones pero nada que hacer ahi, el autor tiene su vida que vivir Disfrute mucho aunque este corto(considerando que me gusta leer mas los de 200+ caps) Arrgg quiero saber que mas pasara con lumine xd y los nuevos sistemas(lumine{diario}-basara{torta con pocion})

1yr
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Seeker_Of_Quality

Eh, it's not high literature but I'll give it a good rating. It's more of a popcorn novella where the conflict happens episodically; the villain hatches some scheme and the MC comes and diverts it. The girls are kinda boring and forgettable but I see that as intentional, they're supposed to be backdrop while the goofy things the MC gets up to take center stage.

1yr
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AniMesHniK_online

I highly recommend this fanfiction to everyone, I really liked it! The fanfic idea is very interesting, I read one of them, but I didn’t like it, the plot unfolded somehow crookedly. But in this fanfiction, everything goes smoothly, without sharp distortions of the thoughts of the MC and holes in the plot and abilities. Here, too, there are nuances; they are not so many and they do not play a strong role in history. Therefore, you can safely read and not notice, it is clear that the author did a good job in writing, and not like most uploaded an unfinished draft. It also leaves a pleasant feeling behind, so I look forward to new chapters of fanfiction!😁👍

1yr
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AKD_Khmer

Good times with an inner-voice series that's light and easily consumed. Definitely could do with some more chapters.

1yr
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DogLickerGods

There are some people who ask if this is an Original Fanfic or MTL? I will answer that this is my own Original Fanfic. You can search for this fanfic on the Chinese website or MTL nation and you won't find it. However, you will find some books that have the same inner voice genre as my fanfic, although the story is obviously different from mine because my fanfic has Highschool Dxd and other series in it.

2yr
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Farhan1998

Is it dropped or what Its been a year since you last updated it ?

3mth
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GupGodLicker

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6mth
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Habib_Isbahani

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6mth
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ShirleyShiroe

When will this continue, it's actually good, you know!

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8mth
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Jiang2219

please update more chapters is really a good novel

8mth
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DollShururu

A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.

9mth
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HorizonWanderer

hey man , update new chapters . it's an interesting fiction

9mth
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DDH
LV 6 Badge

Complaining about Issei for being perverted in an anime that his fans were waiting for the blu-ray to see uncensored... I don't know if you see the irony It feels like the author wrote a story without knowing the base story or even looking at a wiki. I can only define this story as a FanFic of a FanFic.

9mth
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SinaelDOverom

If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".

10mth
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whyexist

kinda leaving luke warm review here because I am interested in this work but he seems to be active in his another works even though it would have been good If he droped a chapter here and there but here we are half of the story half my heart broken and half my time wasted

1yr
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Lutz_
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black_soul_3041

Is this going to be continued just asking?

1yr
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J0s3_Angel

A very good story based on the world of the DXD, the pace of the story seems appropriate, and the development of relationships between the characters seems a bit fast to me, but with a detailed explanation of why. The protagonist is very good and personally, I am satisfied with his performance and attitude.

1yr
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DaoistyQNGiX

Multiple reincarnated/transmigrated characters… one of the few “rules” that you are never supposed to break. Waste of time reading.

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1yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc chinese Mc pathetic [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

1yr
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Krishna_Mondal_2235

I like this novel very much I hope author contuinue this novel.

1yr
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DaddyCarvz

This story is amazing. But is this dropped??

1yr
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Nezuko_Dragneel

author, when will you continue this novel of yours, thank you

1yr
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ThriceRecklessSong

I enjoyed this greatly. But can only reach 3 stars due to author's long and repeated rants about yuri, polyamory and his weak mental state. As well as mtl like writing imo.

1yr
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Coala_Voador

Unfortunately I finished reading it in 2 days, I wanted more chapters. I will read author's recommendation now villain eavesdropping heroines

1yr
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Drake50s

Been awhile since I throughly enjoyed a book

1yr
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TheRedHood

I like it don't really care if you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜♥️♥️♥️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇🥇

1yr
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kokishorttail

Great concept, and I personally love the story, the only problem for me is the bad grammer so I cant really bring myself to finish this, but if you don’t mind bad grammer I would seriously recommend this novel to you.

1yr
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DaoistFiZTje

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Craterzech3

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SHIROMIYA_21

Please new chapter I've Been waiting ❤❤❤❤❤

1yr
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StevenKazuto

Jaaaa ya estoy al dia Definitivamente es bueno La comedia de por medio siempre me mantiene una sonrisa en la cara Aunque voy a extrañarlo por el tiempo entre actualizaciones pero nada que hacer ahi, el autor tiene su vida que vivir Disfrute mucho aunque este corto(considerando que me gusta leer mas los de 200+ caps) Arrgg quiero saber que mas pasara con lumine xd y los nuevos sistemas(lumine{diario}-basara{torta con pocion})

1yr
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Seeker_Of_Quality

Eh, it's not high literature but I'll give it a good rating. It's more of a popcorn novella where the conflict happens episodically; the villain hatches some scheme and the MC comes and diverts it. The girls are kinda boring and forgettable but I see that as intentional, they're supposed to be backdrop while the goofy things the MC gets up to take center stage.

1yr
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AniMesHniK_online

I highly recommend this fanfiction to everyone, I really liked it! The fanfic idea is very interesting, I read one of them, but I didn’t like it, the plot unfolded somehow crookedly. But in this fanfiction, everything goes smoothly, without sharp distortions of the thoughts of the MC and holes in the plot and abilities. Here, too, there are nuances; they are not so many and they do not play a strong role in history. Therefore, you can safely read and not notice, it is clear that the author did a good job in writing, and not like most uploaded an unfinished draft. It also leaves a pleasant feeling behind, so I look forward to new chapters of fanfiction!😁👍

1yr
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AKD_Khmer

Good times with an inner-voice series that's light and easily consumed. Definitely could do with some more chapters.

1yr
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