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A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.
Complaining about Issei for being perverted in an anime that his fans were waiting for the blu-ray to see uncensored... I don't know if you see the irony It feels like the author wrote a story without knowing the base story or even looking at a wiki. I can only define this story as a FanFic of a FanFic.
If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".
kinda leaving luke warm review here because I am interested in this work but he seems to be active in his another works even though it would have been good If he droped a chapter here and there but here we are half of the story half my heart broken and half my time wasted
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A very good story based on the world of the DXD, the pace of the story seems appropriate, and the development of relationships between the characters seems a bit fast to me, but with a detailed explanation of why. The protagonist is very good and personally, I am satisfied with his performance and attitude.
Multiple reincarnated/transmigrated characters… one of the few “rules” that you are never supposed to break. Waste of time reading.
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I enjoyed this greatly. But can only reach 3 stars due to author's long and repeated rants about yuri, polyamory and his weak mental state. As well as mtl like writing imo.
Unfortunately I finished reading it in 2 days, I wanted more chapters. I will read author's recommendation now villain eavesdropping heroines
Great concept, and I personally love the story, the only problem for me is the bad grammer so I cant really bring myself to finish this, but if you don’t mind bad grammer I would seriously recommend this novel to you.
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Jaaaa ya estoy al dia Definitivamente es bueno La comedia de por medio siempre me mantiene una sonrisa en la cara Aunque voy a extrañarlo por el tiempo entre actualizaciones pero nada que hacer ahi, el autor tiene su vida que vivir Disfrute mucho aunque este corto(considerando que me gusta leer mas los de 200+ caps) Arrgg quiero saber que mas pasara con lumine xd y los nuevos sistemas(lumine{diario}-basara{torta con pocion})
Eh, it's not high literature but I'll give it a good rating. It's more of a popcorn novella where the conflict happens episodically; the villain hatches some scheme and the MC comes and diverts it. The girls are kinda boring and forgettable but I see that as intentional, they're supposed to be backdrop while the goofy things the MC gets up to take center stage.
I highly recommend this fanfiction to everyone, I really liked it! The fanfic idea is very interesting, I read one of them, but I didn’t like it, the plot unfolded somehow crookedly. But in this fanfiction, everything goes smoothly, without sharp distortions of the thoughts of the MC and holes in the plot and abilities. Here, too, there are nuances; they are not so many and they do not play a strong role in history. Therefore, you can safely read and not notice, it is clear that the author did a good job in writing, and not like most uploaded an unfinished draft. It also leaves a pleasant feeling behind, so I look forward to new chapters of fanfiction!😁👍
There are some people who ask if this is an Original Fanfic or MTL? I will answer that this is my own Original Fanfic. You can search for this fanfic on the Chinese website or MTL nation and you won't find it. However, you will find some books that have the same inner voice genre as my fanfic, although the story is obviously different from mine because my fanfic has Highschool Dxd and other series in it.
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A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.
Complaining about Issei for being perverted in an anime that his fans were waiting for the blu-ray to see uncensored... I don't know if you see the irony It feels like the author wrote a story without knowing the base story or even looking at a wiki. I can only define this story as a FanFic of a FanFic.
If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".
kinda leaving luke warm review here because I am interested in this work but he seems to be active in his another works even though it would have been good If he droped a chapter here and there but here we are half of the story half my heart broken and half my time wasted
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A very good story based on the world of the DXD, the pace of the story seems appropriate, and the development of relationships between the characters seems a bit fast to me, but with a detailed explanation of why. The protagonist is very good and personally, I am satisfied with his performance and attitude.
Multiple reincarnated/transmigrated characters… one of the few “rules” that you are never supposed to break. Waste of time reading.
揭示劇透Mc chinese Mc pathetic [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
I enjoyed this greatly. But can only reach 3 stars due to author's long and repeated rants about yuri, polyamory and his weak mental state. As well as mtl like writing imo.
Unfortunately I finished reading it in 2 days, I wanted more chapters. I will read author's recommendation now villain eavesdropping heroines
Great concept, and I personally love the story, the only problem for me is the bad grammer so I cant really bring myself to finish this, but if you don’t mind bad grammer I would seriously recommend this novel to you.
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Jaaaa ya estoy al dia Definitivamente es bueno La comedia de por medio siempre me mantiene una sonrisa en la cara Aunque voy a extrañarlo por el tiempo entre actualizaciones pero nada que hacer ahi, el autor tiene su vida que vivir Disfrute mucho aunque este corto(considerando que me gusta leer mas los de 200+ caps) Arrgg quiero saber que mas pasara con lumine xd y los nuevos sistemas(lumine{diario}-basara{torta con pocion})
Eh, it's not high literature but I'll give it a good rating. It's more of a popcorn novella where the conflict happens episodically; the villain hatches some scheme and the MC comes and diverts it. The girls are kinda boring and forgettable but I see that as intentional, they're supposed to be backdrop while the goofy things the MC gets up to take center stage.
I highly recommend this fanfiction to everyone, I really liked it! The fanfic idea is very interesting, I read one of them, but I didn’t like it, the plot unfolded somehow crookedly. But in this fanfiction, everything goes smoothly, without sharp distortions of the thoughts of the MC and holes in the plot and abilities. Here, too, there are nuances; they are not so many and they do not play a strong role in history. Therefore, you can safely read and not notice, it is clear that the author did a good job in writing, and not like most uploaded an unfinished draft. It also leaves a pleasant feeling behind, so I look forward to new chapters of fanfiction!😁👍
There are some people who ask if this is an Original Fanfic or MTL? I will answer that this is my own Original Fanfic. You can search for this fanfic on the Chinese website or MTL nation and you won't find it. However, you will find some books that have the same inner voice genre as my fanfic, although the story is obviously different from mine because my fanfic has Highschool Dxd and other series in it.