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This is a very fun read, but it has some problems with numbers. This series needs a glossary chapter to explain the numbers they made up when the numbers went past quadrillions of units. Most people don't know what comes after quadrillion, or what comes after that, or after that, and so on. So, the author invented things called Gai Units and Capital Units. I think 1 Gai Unit is 10,000 Quadrillion, and 1 Capital Unit is 10,000 Gai Units. Try to figure that out.
well to tell the I like it. bu.. as you guys can expect it's Chinese novel, there are lots of mistakes, like 4+4=1, 1+1=100, 10+10=15. you know what I mean 😉😉😉🤭🤭🤭
I like the story but the translations are awkward to say the least. Would recommended reading it elsewhere since the translator won't correct previous released chapters, 1+ month that translator has not fixed a late chapter that is only 50-60% translated. Plenty of other translation errors with copy paste segment without altering them for current chapter or just pasting several blocks and have 2-4 of the same paragraph. Plenty of other minor issues that are consistent. I like the story and was worth the minor annoyance with translation error but not anymore since they won't correct big mistakes.
Previously read ~1000 chapters. world building is pretty good, character development is pretty lacking, story progression is kinda stop/start with a lot of chapters just being lists of items/skills. Dropped the novel a while ago, tried to pick it back up, chapters 40-170 have relocked expecting me to buy them again. Dropped for good.
Does anyone know if there's a translation for this novel: " The Military-industrial Scientific Research System of the Academic Master " ???
the book is awesome I like it very much read everyday and enjoy it to the fullest i recommend to people this book started slow but reading more of it will gradually pique ur interest
author can I ask you this which is the elephant in the room? well for me it is. which is what happened to their previous planet, i mean did they get integrated like the lords's empire or something and if i presume the lowest age that i know of a lord which is 13 and I just wanted to ask what about those lower than them in age? and aside from those overall the story is great
why is there three versions of this book and all of them are at different points with the chapters??
characters like auguste the specter dragon and soul reaper maris just became non-existent. the development of the characters and his kingdom is dumb and all over the place. just get bombarded with other nations left and right just to obtain all their loot and recruit millions and billions of people everyday and make every other character that's not a direct subject of the main character is barely a background support character. instead of improving the quality of the other human subjects or lords, he's just gaining a massive amount of recruits from anywhere and everywhere. most battles don't turn into a slaughter fest. it's just a war that tends to end quickly since the main character can make half the enemies change sides with a wave of his fingers. the logic of improving quickly but not actually improving quickly in all aspects makes absolutely no sense, which is why I said the development of the characters is dumb and all over the place. this story has or had the potential of being great, but it's just a rushed story that surely loves to repeat the daily activities every chapter just to extend the story.
I'm at chapter 570 over all I'm enjoying this novel my biggest problem and only thing that i think will ruin this for you if you're sensitive about world building is authors's sense of distance , like at this point of story area covered by one city is huge and there are a lot of other city in this area what happened to them ? area is crossing border of another country what happenes to that ? it's as author don't care about world size/distance making sense and just throw random big numbers to be WOW that is big
Everything is good 👍🏻 it's all to my liking and I am currently 1372 chapter and all I have is single complain that is why there is some ridiculous difficulty test mc have to go through I mean I can understand in some novel mc struggle to get stronger but this novel has already made mc way too strong but he has to face combination attack of many race and He is favoured my Supreme Will but why test him each time with ridiculous difficulty because they way it's test it is simply pushing mc on the edge like in some cultivation novel were OP villain plays with mc life influencing his ways that is not the type of novel I like because Op mc is always crush his enemy if supreme will truly favour mc then it should help him rather then raising difficulty to ridiculously high and I hope Author does some about it although I expect major won't mind but I still want to express my feelings here it's kinda depressing after all getting all powerful and at the end you still have to feel helpless 😞
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Translation quality: Average translation, grammar mistakes and difficulty in seperating singularity and plural. Mistaking physical units (water is mesured in liters not kilograms, this indicates that writers is either poorly educated or still in highschool and is not paying attention to class) I would give this writing a D, or a 2 depending on your country education system. Story Development: Pacing is to fast, the maturity of people is extremly low, it is like they never finished highschool mentaly and therefore and incredible optimistic, not realistic at all, do not know how to calculate risk and profit.As I said, beacuse of fast pace, there is no balance or thrill in the story, no mystery, you can see what will happen miles away. The core plot is somewhat good, but when compared to the rest of the story as a whole, it is clear to see it is copied. Grade F, or 1. Characther design: Extremly child like, being normal decent person translates to being geneours and kind, all side characters are made with 1 brain cell, their true motives passions and who they are is not described. Grade F. World Background: Interesting, but a whole idea was more or less copied from Supreme Lord I can extract everything, even their powers are incredibly similar, but ofcourse the write of Supreme Lord is much better in quality. Grade C or 3 but again if you take the fact that is copied I would give him F of 1. In conclusion, go read Supreme Lord I can extract everything, dont even read this to kill time as I have tried
please add this book to Kindle! As a truck driver, I require audio, and unfortunately, webnovel's audio sucks and Alexa does a better job at reading novels. At least she doesn't pause at every single line while reading. so please add it to Kindle. You should be able to create a strong fanbase as well.
can you please make a list of the tiers of stuff because it's getting me all confused it would probably help me understand how rare or what-not stuff is 🙏🙏🙏
love the whole story painfully bad on repeating paragraphs and confusing numbers if you can figure out the missing zeros very simple fixes in editing and this would definitely be one of my top books over the year and I've read thousands of books please fix and publish it I'll give it a good home with plenty of friends
Great story but just need to improve on the translation of some chapters with wrong information indicated, wrong grammar, and missing words in some parts.
The Case Of The Original Elf Empire Empress Is Quite Disheartening (Holy/Sacred Death/Sacrifice Case), And It Can Also Be Deduced That Both The Supreme Will And Crimson Overlord Are Both Daughters Of The Chaos Will and They Fight But Are Not At Each Others Troats... And The True Bodies Of Both The Supreme Will And Crimson Overlord Can Be Said To Be Of Yound Ladies With Mature Bodies; With The Supreme Will Being A Lady With Silver Hair And Golden eyes Plus Lomg Hair That Reaches Floor-Length Long Hair, And The Crimson Overlord Is A Red-Haired Woman With A High Ponytail And A Hot Body Wearing Crop-Top Shirt Overhanging Breasts And Hot Pants Taht Are Short Shorts
the story is the same as the, Everyone is a lord my, talent is a little too strong. i don't know who is the original, but i want to say, i have enough with Chinese story.
A poorly translated CN novel with zero world building, zero character development, an Overpowered mc with zero personality. Another garbanzo novel....Sigh
Clearly shouldn't be doing business with this fake crypto platform , you should know the outcome from all the reviews on here and other places. It takes the involvement of marketpeace. n et , to rid you of this . Not an advice but do with this info what you will
TRUE REVIEW CH900* filled with numerous useless info- every ch half content filled with loots detail.. garbage info dump to make nos. and he does this for everyday of mc..*story line tooo fast- in just a month mc has become super duper powerful person and his territory has become super large...*no time skips everyday life details given..like I said I think not even 6 months has gone by and he is super boss of human race..*he gets same no of troops daily he does the same thing daily but author has to give this info dump in every ch..even if he earns a single core author mentioned it..
In addition to what I consider to be common errors in this genre (lack of depth in character personality in general, rushed events in a short period of time) I think what most disappoints is that it's not really kingdom building, I mean the MC just leaves out there dominating territories and plays into the hands of his "subjects" to administer, there is no type of discussion about choosing territory for construction, economic and food problems faced. Basically another "Lord of People" with op mc without any depth in general
Its good overall but it feels too slow on the long run. Ive read 1000 chaps and only 1 month went by in the novel. The world background is quite good and i liked how mc fighted the world without background but i got bored from time to time since everyday he did almost the same things and author for some reason had a fear to skip things, be it time skip, skip repeating the same rutinary actions everyday or just skip the half chapter description of rewards mc gets from hunting monsters and so on. Also, i didnt like how the romance is set in this novel. By now mc has just 1 relationship even though there are like 5 girls at least in love with him but he just ignores them. So you might think thats because he was in love since start with the 1 relationship he has, nop. He started a relationship with a princess he knew just of 2 days and didnt meet for more than 3 times and showed no mutual attraction but ignored bai yun who was with him from the 1 day and is clearly devoted to him. Other remarkable thing is the mcs attitude, read chapters 995-996 and you will know what i mean by that. He claims through out all the novel not to be a saint but acts as one when he can and also when he cant, helped by the plot. He claims his moral as the upright and when someone doesnt agree with him the first thing he did was to check his loyalty because he is too used to people licking his feets and walking a smooth path. He is willing to show mercy (in those chaps and i guess itll remain like so in the future) to the enemy when thats a privilege of the powerfull, which he isnt but is too full of himself to realize. Specially if you know some chaps before almost his army was wiped by the remanents of the kingdoms he destroyed, because he didnt left them fully clean, because they set up a trap and would succed if not the mc realized thanks to the plot and make it in time. To sum up, the story and the world background is really good but there are some things with the pace and mcs personality who are hard to endure. If you can, you should really read this novel because its def above average.
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no world building, no proper translation, no character development, the whole story is just for the mc plot Armor, even more messed up thing is all these 1100 chapters happened in just 30 novel days and mc even became god in less than 30 days
Way too much unnecessary word padding. It really detracts from the enjoyment of the story. Loot is repeated twice for everything. Hmm, I wonder why?
this novel.... sigh... I find it disappointing close to the chap 1kit's alright in the beginning but everything just went haywire cause I left it for a few weeks... same with global towers .... oh well the author tried .... but i feel like it's a repetition of sth I've read before
I haven't been reading novels for a long time, and even though I'm still on chapter 33 I can see that this story is good, it has a lot of potential and the idea is original, unfortunately I'll have to use fast passes after chapter 40 so my reading pace will be super slow, but slowly I'll read all of this, and say: this shit is good
This is a very fun read, but it has some problems with numbers. This series needs a glossary chapter to explain the numbers they made up when the numbers went past quadrillions of units. Most people don't know what comes after quadrillion, or what comes after that, or after that, and so on. So, the author invented things called Gai Units and Capital Units. I think 1 Gai Unit is 10,000 Quadrillion, and 1 Capital Unit is 10,000 Gai Units. Try to figure that out.
well to tell the I like it. bu.. as you guys can expect it's Chinese novel, there are lots of mistakes, like 4+4=1, 1+1=100, 10+10=15. you know what I mean 😉😉😉🤭🤭🤭
I like the story but the translations are awkward to say the least. Would recommended reading it elsewhere since the translator won't correct previous released chapters, 1+ month that translator has not fixed a late chapter that is only 50-60% translated. Plenty of other translation errors with copy paste segment without altering them for current chapter or just pasting several blocks and have 2-4 of the same paragraph. Plenty of other minor issues that are consistent. I like the story and was worth the minor annoyance with translation error but not anymore since they won't correct big mistakes.
Previously read ~1000 chapters. world building is pretty good, character development is pretty lacking, story progression is kinda stop/start with a lot of chapters just being lists of items/skills. Dropped the novel a while ago, tried to pick it back up, chapters 40-170 have relocked expecting me to buy them again. Dropped for good.
Does anyone know if there's a translation for this novel: " The Military-industrial Scientific Research System of the Academic Master " ???
the book is awesome I like it very much read everyday and enjoy it to the fullest i recommend to people this book started slow but reading more of it will gradually pique ur interest
author can I ask you this which is the elephant in the room? well for me it is. which is what happened to their previous planet, i mean did they get integrated like the lords's empire or something and if i presume the lowest age that i know of a lord which is 13 and I just wanted to ask what about those lower than them in age? and aside from those overall the story is great
why is there three versions of this book and all of them are at different points with the chapters??
characters like auguste the specter dragon and soul reaper maris just became non-existent. the development of the characters and his kingdom is dumb and all over the place. just get bombarded with other nations left and right just to obtain all their loot and recruit millions and billions of people everyday and make every other character that's not a direct subject of the main character is barely a background support character. instead of improving the quality of the other human subjects or lords, he's just gaining a massive amount of recruits from anywhere and everywhere. most battles don't turn into a slaughter fest. it's just a war that tends to end quickly since the main character can make half the enemies change sides with a wave of his fingers. the logic of improving quickly but not actually improving quickly in all aspects makes absolutely no sense, which is why I said the development of the characters is dumb and all over the place. this story has or had the potential of being great, but it's just a rushed story that surely loves to repeat the daily activities every chapter just to extend the story.
I'm at chapter 570 over all I'm enjoying this novel my biggest problem and only thing that i think will ruin this for you if you're sensitive about world building is authors's sense of distance , like at this point of story area covered by one city is huge and there are a lot of other city in this area what happened to them ? area is crossing border of another country what happenes to that ? it's as author don't care about world size/distance making sense and just throw random big numbers to be WOW that is big
Everything is good 👍🏻 it's all to my liking and I am currently 1372 chapter and all I have is single complain that is why there is some ridiculous difficulty test mc have to go through I mean I can understand in some novel mc struggle to get stronger but this novel has already made mc way too strong but he has to face combination attack of many race and He is favoured my Supreme Will but why test him each time with ridiculous difficulty because they way it's test it is simply pushing mc on the edge like in some cultivation novel were OP villain plays with mc life influencing his ways that is not the type of novel I like because Op mc is always crush his enemy if supreme will truly favour mc then it should help him rather then raising difficulty to ridiculously high and I hope Author does some about it although I expect major won't mind but I still want to express my feelings here it's kinda depressing after all getting all powerful and at the end you still have to feel helpless 😞
揭示劇透 Translation quality: Average translation, grammar mistakes and difficulty in seperating singularity and plural. Mistaking physical units (water is mesured in liters not kilograms, this indicates that writers is either poorly educated or still in highschool and is not paying attention to class) I would give this writing a D, or a 2 depending on your country education system. Story Development: Pacing is to fast, the maturity of people is extremly low, it is like they never finished highschool mentaly and therefore and incredible optimistic, not realistic at all, do not know how to calculate risk and profit.As I said, beacuse of fast pace, there is no balance or thrill in the story, no mystery, you can see what will happen miles away. The core plot is somewhat good, but when compared to the rest of the story as a whole, it is clear to see it is copied. Grade F, or 1. Characther design: Extremly child like, being normal decent person translates to being geneours and kind, all side characters are made with 1 brain cell, their true motives passions and who they are is not described. Grade F. World Background: Interesting, but a whole idea was more or less copied from Supreme Lord I can extract everything, even their powers are incredibly similar, but ofcourse the write of Supreme Lord is much better in quality. Grade C or 3 but again if you take the fact that is copied I would give him F of 1. In conclusion, go read Supreme Lord I can extract everything, dont even read this to kill time as I have tried
please add this book to Kindle! As a truck driver, I require audio, and unfortunately, webnovel's audio sucks and Alexa does a better job at reading novels. At least she doesn't pause at every single line while reading. so please add it to Kindle. You should be able to create a strong fanbase as well.
can you please make a list of the tiers of stuff because it's getting me all confused it would probably help me understand how rare or what-not stuff is 🙏🙏🙏
love the whole story painfully bad on repeating paragraphs and confusing numbers if you can figure out the missing zeros very simple fixes in editing and this would definitely be one of my top books over the year and I've read thousands of books please fix and publish it I'll give it a good home with plenty of friends
Great story but just need to improve on the translation of some chapters with wrong information indicated, wrong grammar, and missing words in some parts.
The Case Of The Original Elf Empire Empress Is Quite Disheartening (Holy/Sacred Death/Sacrifice Case), And It Can Also Be Deduced That Both The Supreme Will And Crimson Overlord Are Both Daughters Of The Chaos Will and They Fight But Are Not At Each Others Troats... And The True Bodies Of Both The Supreme Will And Crimson Overlord Can Be Said To Be Of Yound Ladies With Mature Bodies; With The Supreme Will Being A Lady With Silver Hair And Golden eyes Plus Lomg Hair That Reaches Floor-Length Long Hair, And The Crimson Overlord Is A Red-Haired Woman With A High Ponytail And A Hot Body Wearing Crop-Top Shirt Overhanging Breasts And Hot Pants Taht Are Short Shorts
the story is the same as the, Everyone is a lord my, talent is a little too strong. i don't know who is the original, but i want to say, i have enough with Chinese story.
A poorly translated CN novel with zero world building, zero character development, an Overpowered mc with zero personality. Another garbanzo novel....Sigh
Clearly shouldn't be doing business with this fake crypto platform , you should know the outcome from all the reviews on here and other places. It takes the involvement of marketpeace. n et , to rid you of this . Not an advice but do with this info what you will
TRUE REVIEW CH900* filled with numerous useless info- every ch half content filled with loots detail.. garbage info dump to make nos. and he does this for everyday of mc..*story line tooo fast- in just a month mc has become super duper powerful person and his territory has become super large...*no time skips everyday life details given..like I said I think not even 6 months has gone by and he is super boss of human race..*he gets same no of troops daily he does the same thing daily but author has to give this info dump in every ch..even if he earns a single core author mentioned it..
In addition to what I consider to be common errors in this genre (lack of depth in character personality in general, rushed events in a short period of time) I think what most disappoints is that it's not really kingdom building, I mean the MC just leaves out there dominating territories and plays into the hands of his "subjects" to administer, there is no type of discussion about choosing territory for construction, economic and food problems faced. Basically another "Lord of People" with op mc without any depth in general
Its good overall but it feels too slow on the long run. Ive read 1000 chaps and only 1 month went by in the novel. The world background is quite good and i liked how mc fighted the world without background but i got bored from time to time since everyday he did almost the same things and author for some reason had a fear to skip things, be it time skip, skip repeating the same rutinary actions everyday or just skip the half chapter description of rewards mc gets from hunting monsters and so on. Also, i didnt like how the romance is set in this novel. By now mc has just 1 relationship even though there are like 5 girls at least in love with him but he just ignores them. So you might think thats because he was in love since start with the 1 relationship he has, nop. He started a relationship with a princess he knew just of 2 days and didnt meet for more than 3 times and showed no mutual attraction but ignored bai yun who was with him from the 1 day and is clearly devoted to him. Other remarkable thing is the mcs attitude, read chapters 995-996 and you will know what i mean by that. He claims through out all the novel not to be a saint but acts as one when he can and also when he cant, helped by the plot. He claims his moral as the upright and when someone doesnt agree with him the first thing he did was to check his loyalty because he is too used to people licking his feets and walking a smooth path. He is willing to show mercy (in those chaps and i guess itll remain like so in the future) to the enemy when thats a privilege of the powerfull, which he isnt but is too full of himself to realize. Specially if you know some chaps before almost his army was wiped by the remanents of the kingdoms he destroyed, because he didnt left them fully clean, because they set up a trap and would succed if not the mc realized thanks to the plot and make it in time. To sum up, the story and the world background is really good but there are some things with the pace and mcs personality who are hard to endure. If you can, you should really read this novel because its def above average.
揭示劇透 no world building, no proper translation, no character development, the whole story is just for the mc plot Armor, even more messed up thing is all these 1100 chapters happened in just 30 novel days and mc even became god in less than 30 days
Way too much unnecessary word padding. It really detracts from the enjoyment of the story. Loot is repeated twice for everything. Hmm, I wonder why?
this novel.... sigh... I find it disappointing close to the chap 1kit's alright in the beginning but everything just went haywire cause I left it for a few weeks... same with global towers .... oh well the author tried .... but i feel like it's a repetition of sth I've read before
I haven't been reading novels for a long time, and even though I'm still on chapter 33 I can see that this story is good, it has a lot of potential and the idea is original, unfortunately I'll have to use fast passes after chapter 40 so my reading pace will be super slow, but slowly I'll read all of this, and say: this shit is good