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if he's in the MCU, the vulture wouldn't appear after the events of avengers 1. When he's denied permission to pick up the debris from the alien invasion?
"Going to try to avoid clichés" "MC is not a huge spiderman fan" You then proceed to make a mc that acts exactly like spiderman. Would love to see a story about a peter parker that breaks the spiderman mold, dosen't have to be a murderhobo, just something different.
Eat five stars... but someone has to answer the most important question: Harem or not a harem? That's the question is... ----- probably have to read to find out...
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It's been a pretty good story and I'm looking forward to future chapters. please keep up the good work and don't drop this story cuz honestly I be mad if you drop it.
if he's in the MCU, the vulture wouldn't appear after the events of avengers 1. When he's denied permission to pick up the debris from the alien invasion?
"Going to try to avoid clichés" "MC is not a huge spiderman fan" You then proceed to make a mc that acts exactly like spiderman. Would love to see a story about a peter parker that breaks the spiderman mold, dosen't have to be a murderhobo, just something different.
Eat five stars... but someone has to answer the most important question: Harem or not a harem? That's the question is... ----- probably have to read to find out...
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It's been a pretty good story and I'm looking forward to future chapters. please keep up the good work and don't drop this story cuz honestly I be mad if you drop it.
I really love this story so please keep it up.!