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Interesting start I just read the first chapter now I’m a little interested hope the rest of the story is good.
Ini lumayan bagus.... Tolong lanjutkan menulis nya ,, jikalau bisa update crazy yah ........... ......... ......... .......... .......... .......... ..........
Adorei mais quero mais caps está 1 ano sem postar nada por favor quero muito continuar lendo se isso for mtl manda o link por favor autor...............................
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why would he take bulma.she even mentioned another man while doing with mc and why is it seem like they love each other.
Still awaiting the next chapters if there are any... it's the only reason my review isn't a full 5★
Para cuando salen más capitulos o hay alguien que conozca novelas similares ? También busco novelas de mismo género o de tipo que roben habilidades
novel is good mc uses his brain to do works , but i have one problem why author keep mc powers so low even in Naruto world he is just above some human in power scaling and now he is in dbz world. even after ntr some female heroines he does not get any good ability literally author give him some good ability if he goes to big world like dbz fir self protection at least and don't pick deal trick again and again it only works on weak human so it's my honest review it has good potential but mc powers are really weak.....
Very good no neto rare don't trust fake reviews only problem author not updating
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I absolutely love the novel it a great work definitely recommend but I am confused how itachi was suddenly.
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the review is funny ....................................................................................................................................................
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Cheating is never ok, I don't care if you just fantazise about it, but the moment you act on is the moment you go to far, you legit breaks someone heart and trust. If the relationship doesn't work just talk about it and make a clean cut, then find others. Not cheating, because I can assure you, in any scenario the person that cheats is absolute garbadge in the eyes of every decent person. Also what is this hypocrisy about hating beeing cheated on but beeing ok if you do it. You are the worst.
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the ff started well, but each new chapter gets worse. 1.He let them enter the dungeon and leave just because they are protagonists. 2.Another tried to seduce his wife with a charm and let him go like nothing happened.
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Very good ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~:)
i feel conflicted, it is trash plot but the quality is top notch for this kind of story on webnovel, just want to burn some time, at least this story not kind of xianxia novel
Interesting start I just read the first chapter now I’m a little interested hope the rest of the story is good.
Ini lumayan bagus.... Tolong lanjutkan menulis nya ,, jikalau bisa update crazy yah ........... ......... ......... .......... .......... .......... ..........
Adorei mais quero mais caps está 1 ano sem postar nada por favor quero muito continuar lendo se isso for mtl manda o link por favor autor...............................
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why would he take bulma.she even mentioned another man while doing with mc and why is it seem like they love each other.
Still awaiting the next chapters if there are any... it's the only reason my review isn't a full 5★
Para cuando salen más capitulos o hay alguien que conozca novelas similares ? También busco novelas de mismo género o de tipo que roben habilidades
novel is good mc uses his brain to do works , but i have one problem why author keep mc powers so low even in Naruto world he is just above some human in power scaling and now he is in dbz world. even after ntr some female heroines he does not get any good ability literally author give him some good ability if he goes to big world like dbz fir self protection at least and don't pick deal trick again and again it only works on weak human so it's my honest review it has good potential but mc powers are really weak.....
Very good no neto rare don't trust fake reviews only problem author not updating
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I absolutely love the novel it a great work definitely recommend but I am confused how itachi was suddenly.
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Perfect..............................................................................................................,.................................................................................................................. your a god
Good ..................................................................................................... ..................................................................
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揭示劇透 the review is funny ....................................................................................................................................................
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Cheating is never ok, I don't care if you just fantazise about it, but the moment you act on is the moment you go to far, you legit breaks someone heart and trust. If the relationship doesn't work just talk about it and make a clean cut, then find others. Not cheating, because I can assure you, in any scenario the person that cheats is absolute garbadge in the eyes of every decent person. Also what is this hypocrisy about hating beeing cheated on but beeing ok if you do it. You are the worst.
Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE
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the ff started well, but each new chapter gets worse. 1.He let them enter the dungeon and leave just because they are protagonists. 2.Another tried to seduce his wife with a charm and let him go like nothing happened.
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i feel conflicted, it is trash plot but the quality is top notch for this kind of story on webnovel, just want to burn some time, at least this story not kind of xianxia novel
sebenarnya cerita nya bagus ... tapi kenapa gak di lanjutkan ???