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Well written story, also loved the record of ragnarok references, has some good humour here and there, and the development of the main character was fun to read, overall i would definitely give this story a read.
This is such a beautiful story, sure it may be kinda crazy, considering how Kojiro talks about his time as a Servant amongst all things, but it's still a pretty good story to read, I can't wait till the next chapter though and see him fight pretty much a massive swallow
I like it a lot sorry i am kind of biased when it comes to fate but i really love the series and this is a good fic but don't wait on me read it it's not too good but not too bad at the same time.
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揭示劇透 Well written story, also loved the record of ragnarok references, has some good humour here and there, and the development of the main character was fun to read, overall i would definitely give this story a read.
This is such a beautiful story, sure it may be kinda crazy, considering how Kojiro talks about his time as a Servant amongst all things, but it's still a pretty good story to read, I can't wait till the next chapter though and see him fight pretty much a massive swallow
I like it a lot sorry i am kind of biased when it comes to fate but i really love the series and this is a good fic but don't wait on me read it it's not too good but not too bad at the same time.
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