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Overall storyline was predictable and the lack of proofreading and editing made this hard to read. Almost 40 chapters in and the author still mispells certain words like “released” and spells it like “realised” and moved like “Leer” are spelled “Lear.” There’s too many side stories from the side characters. One every ten chapters or so is fine but every other chapter is annoying and lacks pushing the storyline. If you like battle scenes, this is a great read; if you like an actual story with plot, don’t waste your time.
It’s an entertaining read, the battle scenes were written well and it’s easy to visualise what is happening. There are plenty of misspells but it is otherwise understandable. Personal opinion, too many side stories. While it’s nice to know what the other characters are up to, it detracts a fair amount of interest in the overall story especially when you are invested in the MC’s journey. Overall fun read for the battles but if you are looking for a more flushed out story and plot I would recommend looking for something else
Overall storyline was predictable and the lack of proofreading and editing made this hard to read. Almost 40 chapters in and the author still mispells certain words like “released” and spells it like “realised” and moved like “Leer” are spelled “Lear.” There’s too many side stories from the side characters. One every ten chapters or so is fine but every other chapter is annoying and lacks pushing the storyline. If you like battle scenes, this is a great read; if you like an actual story with plot, don’t waste your time.
It’s an entertaining read, the battle scenes were written well and it’s easy to visualise what is happening. There are plenty of misspells but it is otherwise understandable. Personal opinion, too many side stories. While it’s nice to know what the other characters are up to, it detracts a fair amount of interest in the overall story especially when you are invested in the MC’s journey. Overall fun read for the battles but if you are looking for a more flushed out story and plot I would recommend looking for something else