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Cheeky author review here! No schedule, by balls are sore from life drop kicking them so frequently as of late, how ever I will continue the story for sure! BY ALL MEANS, if you want to see something happen, interaction you want to have happen, skills/ability ideas, criticism or just a plain old comment go for it, I‘d love to hear any and all!
Cheeky author review here! No schedule, by balls are sore from life drop kicking them so frequently as of late, how ever I will continue the story for sure! BY ALL MEANS, if you want to see something happen, interaction you want to have happen, skills/ability ideas, criticism or just a plain old comment go for it, I‘d love to hear any and all!