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truly appreciate your story is so much fun if there are still continuation about the future results for the villains and the leads characters❤️❤️❤️
The beginning is quite great for a relaxing read. But the ending, I dont even know whether it could be called the Final Chapter or not.
The story needs an editor. The characters are cartoonish and one dimentional. It reads as a parody.
Great story. People complained the story wasn’t complete but that is definitely not the case. Everything is wrapped up in the end.
I don't usually write reviews, but this novel deserves it. The story starts well with a good FL and ML, FL's family is quite adorable and fun. The story develops well in the beginning and middle of the story. The problem is with the ending. A terribly rushed ending to get by, many interesting details of the story were lost and the way in which they beat the villains of the story and the entire ending leaves you with a bitter taste due to how unfinished it is. It was fun to read as well as disappointing.
This book is incomplete!!! I was so disappointed when I realized that the ending was not real. Not worth reading as it’s incomplete.
The quality of the translation is poor, obviously it's MTL. But this is tolerable, because the plot is good. But as reader, one thing that I can't tolerate is INCOMPLETE stories! Felt like I've been scammed!
Loved this story. got confused with little brother le and yin huie many times.. but all in all it was very good
I was interested in this novel. Translation was not great, but I continued. Sometimes I get confused w the gender as the translation tends to use “he” a lot. Names were misplaced. Seriously, can we come up w different names for characters. Le Wan, Le An, Le Yan. Can we be a bit more creative? I didn’t mind that they labeled the brothers as elder, second, and younger. This was a short, 510 chapters. As I was nearing the end of the novel, I was thinking how the author can wrap it up. To my utter disappointment, the book didn’t have a proper conclusion. Why?????? DON’T READ unless you’re in for a disappointment. So sad. *****SPOILER***** How can parents be so open-minded that they give the daughter’s BF a pack of condoms and say “I don’t want to be grandparents yet.” Really!?!?!?! You go on vacation w your GF’s fam and you rent a room to have a few exciting times just to go home and your whole family gives you a wink wink, I know what you did. Yucks!
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it is a great story but a bummer 😞 at the end as it is incomplete and not given an end. however, they named the last updated chapter as finale completely dousing the expectations. so many loose threads left hanging. not even one thread is properly concluded. I wonder why web novel likes to promote such incomplete novels. if they can't provide complete translations atleast make them free for readers so they don't waste fast passes or coins on such disappointing works. Total waste of my sleepless binge reading nights.[img=faceslap]
Tiene una trama sencilla, una lectura rápida y agradable y está terminada, súper recomendable
I really enjoyed this book. It was amazing the way it progress. The plot was great as well. My biggest problem is that the story is considered completed yet. It came to no real end. Why are they only off to college? They never destroy the people and took their revenge. What’s going on?
This novel is amazing it has comedy and I love the relationships between the family members.
Good story but keep on using Le Xuan (mc blood related younger brother, middle school student) name for her underling Yin Huai (classmate, high-school student). Although it does not affect story if you read the content, but if you read the content while translating, should not have gotten it mixed in first place.
I just uploaded the last chapter of this web novel. It was a pleasure working on this. I thank everyone who supported this web novel and apologize for any issue.
the translation is so bad it is actually nearly impossible to understand even the simplest paragraphs
It's too confusing to read. The names and gender of MCs change all the time. The fiancé who was supposed to be cold is a playboy who is trying to get close to the MC and I guess dating her and her cousin at the same time. And the chapters are quite short.
I love how the mc and ml fell in love. It's really a sweet love story plus not slow pace or dragging of plot.
I have been so tired of reading novels with bad family dynamics so it’s refreshing to see one with the Mc having a great family! Also the fact that the Mc isn’t actually the typical rich “ceo” who is much older than the fl but one who is also in high school with her. It’s a great read and I wish it had more chapters 😢
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I don’t know what going on? Story is interesting but translation is not. It’s really confusing
interesting 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 hope to see more chapters 😊😊😊😊 thanks a lot author ☺️☺️☺️ it's is super good...be healthy.. waiting for next chapter ..
truly appreciate your story is so much fun if there are still continuation about the future results for the villains and the leads characters❤️❤️❤️
The beginning is quite great for a relaxing read. But the ending, I dont even know whether it could be called the Final Chapter or not.
The story needs an editor. The characters are cartoonish and one dimentional. It reads as a parody.
Great story. People complained the story wasn’t complete but that is definitely not the case. Everything is wrapped up in the end.
I don't usually write reviews, but this novel deserves it. The story starts well with a good FL and ML, FL's family is quite adorable and fun. The story develops well in the beginning and middle of the story. The problem is with the ending. A terribly rushed ending to get by, many interesting details of the story were lost and the way in which they beat the villains of the story and the entire ending leaves you with a bitter taste due to how unfinished it is. It was fun to read as well as disappointing.
This book is incomplete!!! I was so disappointed when I realized that the ending was not real. Not worth reading as it’s incomplete.
The quality of the translation is poor, obviously it's MTL. But this is tolerable, because the plot is good. But as reader, one thing that I can't tolerate is INCOMPLETE stories! Felt like I've been scammed!
Loved this story. got confused with little brother le and yin huie many times.. but all in all it was very good
I was interested in this novel. Translation was not great, but I continued. Sometimes I get confused w the gender as the translation tends to use “he” a lot. Names were misplaced. Seriously, can we come up w different names for characters. Le Wan, Le An, Le Yan. Can we be a bit more creative? I didn’t mind that they labeled the brothers as elder, second, and younger. This was a short, 510 chapters. As I was nearing the end of the novel, I was thinking how the author can wrap it up. To my utter disappointment, the book didn’t have a proper conclusion. Why?????? DON’T READ unless you’re in for a disappointment. So sad. *****SPOILER***** How can parents be so open-minded that they give the daughter’s BF a pack of condoms and say “I don’t want to be grandparents yet.” Really!?!?!?! You go on vacation w your GF’s fam and you rent a room to have a few exciting times just to go home and your whole family gives you a wink wink, I know what you did. Yucks!
揭示劇透 it is a great story but a bummer 😞 at the end as it is incomplete and not given an end. however, they named the last updated chapter as finale completely dousing the expectations. so many loose threads left hanging. not even one thread is properly concluded. I wonder why web novel likes to promote such incomplete novels. if they can't provide complete translations atleast make them free for readers so they don't waste fast passes or coins on such disappointing works. Total waste of my sleepless binge reading nights.[img=faceslap]
Tiene una trama sencilla, una lectura rápida y agradable y está terminada, súper recomendable
I really enjoyed this book. It was amazing the way it progress. The plot was great as well. My biggest problem is that the story is considered completed yet. It came to no real end. Why are they only off to college? They never destroy the people and took their revenge. What’s going on?
This novel is amazing it has comedy and I love the relationships between the family members.
Good story but keep on using Le Xuan (mc blood related younger brother, middle school student) name for her underling Yin Huai (classmate, high-school student). Although it does not affect story if you read the content, but if you read the content while translating, should not have gotten it mixed in first place.
I just uploaded the last chapter of this web novel. It was a pleasure working on this. I thank everyone who supported this web novel and apologize for any issue.
the translation is so bad it is actually nearly impossible to understand even the simplest paragraphs
It's too confusing to read. The names and gender of MCs change all the time. The fiancé who was supposed to be cold is a playboy who is trying to get close to the MC and I guess dating her and her cousin at the same time. And the chapters are quite short.
I love how the mc and ml fell in love. It's really a sweet love story plus not slow pace or dragging of plot.
I have been so tired of reading novels with bad family dynamics so it’s refreshing to see one with the Mc having a great family! Also the fact that the Mc isn’t actually the typical rich “ceo” who is much older than the fl but one who is also in high school with her. It’s a great read and I wish it had more chapters 😢
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I don’t know what going on? Story is interesting but translation is not. It’s really confusing
interesting 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 hope to see more chapters 😊😊😊😊 thanks a lot author ☺️☺️☺️ it's is super good...be healthy.. waiting for next chapter ..
Up until the end, it was good. Didn't like the ending