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I've read all the current chapters, but will be dropping this. Problems: 1 Mc is boring and has no goals for 90% of the time. 2 Some stuff, like how he gets into the enclave base feels a bit like forced plot, like he is actually just an npc moving along the plot. 3 The healing system got a massive nerf. At first bullet wounds didn't cause that much damage besides pain and hp% going down, yet at a certain point he started getting damaged more normally. System got nerfed or what. 4 Personal preference, but I wish that he actually could create his own modifications, not just generic ones, and that it wouldn't just make him black out, but rather either give him the knowledge so he could do it himself or he would have to learn at least a bit to earn the perk and once again, do it himself. Overall, it's a bit too boring and the system/world logic likes to seemingly jump around.
Quite, boring. This is less of an fallout ff, and more like log of some fictional character playing the game. It would have been much more interesting if mc actually had to deal with transporting stuff, actually learning how to manufacture stuff with proper workshop. There's just zero realism and this ff runs on totally on game logic aka. stuff will just happen because mc selects something in pip-boy. Overall, this is more of an story of someone playing some sort of full immersion FONV VR game than actually reincarnating into actual world. Pretty boring. Thus far he also hasn't had any real goals or opinions about the world, he's pretty much just doing some random quests one at the time like npc.
Really good fic, its hard to find good fic of fallout XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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finally a awesome fanfic hope author don't drop [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
yup this fanfic that i looking for , hope the author keep this fanfic going it has a lot of potential and its rare to find fallout fanfic that the mc have a struggle, 9/10 luck is not 10 so yeah
10 years before new Vagas starts is an interesting time line i wonder how it will go. yrycrf6rf6f6r6frycrycrcyrctdcyrcdycfcfyvfggggvyyvfyggvufuvfuvfuggyggggg
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Please, don't drop it, it's so good pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
Mojave wasteland at its finest, if I have to say. The world around the character is quite lively, mainly due to how the mc interacts with it. Still, the area in which the MC was in was still around Primm and Mojave outpost as I wrote this review
A very good story, overall. The author manages to convey the character's opinion in each location in new vegas and having a somehow relevant opinion with what I had in mind. 10/10.
Overall, a good story with an interesting character development. I have to say that I'm looking forward to how this story progresses. Four stars for now, in case the author decided to drop it outright. I'm quite invested P
FINALLY another decent fallout fanfic with a wide reaching outline, don't you dare drop! And if you ever need help with information or advisory about real world military munitions, just reply with a method of contact author!!!
Good character development, judging from the synopsis, Enzo would be the part of the enclave, sooner or later. please, don't drop it authors
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Finally, a good fallout book based on MoJave, would the MC enters the enclave though. I hope you don't drop it before that part, author. xpxpxpxp
The very interesting part of this book is the part where the MC progresses through the game, learning the nook and cranny from the world he currently lives in, can't wait for more
I loved the story so far, but then there were no updates for 7 months, and I am still waiting and hoping for more content 7 months later.😭
I've read all the current chapters, but will be dropping this. Problems: 1 Mc is boring and has no goals for 90% of the time. 2 Some stuff, like how he gets into the enclave base feels a bit like forced plot, like he is actually just an npc moving along the plot. 3 The healing system got a massive nerf. At first bullet wounds didn't cause that much damage besides pain and hp% going down, yet at a certain point he started getting damaged more normally. System got nerfed or what. 4 Personal preference, but I wish that he actually could create his own modifications, not just generic ones, and that it wouldn't just make him black out, but rather either give him the knowledge so he could do it himself or he would have to learn at least a bit to earn the perk and once again, do it himself. Overall, it's a bit too boring and the system/world logic likes to seemingly jump around.
Quite, boring. This is less of an fallout ff, and more like log of some fictional character playing the game. It would have been much more interesting if mc actually had to deal with transporting stuff, actually learning how to manufacture stuff with proper workshop. There's just zero realism and this ff runs on totally on game logic aka. stuff will just happen because mc selects something in pip-boy. Overall, this is more of an story of someone playing some sort of full immersion FONV VR game than actually reincarnating into actual world. Pretty boring. Thus far he also hasn't had any real goals or opinions about the world, he's pretty much just doing some random quests one at the time like npc.
Really good fic, its hard to find good fic of fallout XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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finally a awesome fanfic hope author don't drop [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
yup this fanfic that i looking for , hope the author keep this fanfic going it has a lot of potential and its rare to find fallout fanfic that the mc have a struggle, 9/10 luck is not 10 so yeah
10 years before new Vagas starts is an interesting time line i wonder how it will go. yrycrf6rf6f6r6frycrycrcyrctdcyrcdycfcfyvfggggvyyvfyggvufuvfuvfuggyggggg
Nice story [img=exp] XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Please, don't drop it, it's so good pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
Mojave wasteland at its finest, if I have to say. The world around the character is quite lively, mainly due to how the mc interacts with it. Still, the area in which the MC was in was still around Primm and Mojave outpost as I wrote this review
A very good story, overall. The author manages to convey the character's opinion in each location in new vegas and having a somehow relevant opinion with what I had in mind. 10/10.
Overall, a good story with an interesting character development. I have to say that I'm looking forward to how this story progresses. Four stars for now, in case the author decided to drop it outright. I'm quite invested P
FINALLY another decent fallout fanfic with a wide reaching outline, don't you dare drop! And if you ever need help with information or advisory about real world military munitions, just reply with a method of contact author!!!
Good character development, judging from the synopsis, Enzo would be the part of the enclave, sooner or later. please, don't drop it authors
Good story, xpxpxpxp[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Finally, a good fallout book based on MoJave, would the MC enters the enclave though. I hope you don't drop it before that part, author. xpxpxpxp
The very interesting part of this book is the part where the MC progresses through the game, learning the nook and cranny from the world he currently lives in, can't wait for more
I loved the story so far, but then there were no updates for 7 months, and I am still waiting and hoping for more content 7 months later.😭