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This is a great book, only if I had the time to read it!!. it has all the elements you're looking for I couldn't score it a 5 because I wasn't completely done with the book and there isn't such thing as perfect. small minor improvements are needed but this is a masterpiece, would read in time.
Actually wow! Such careful writing with great details. As a reader, you're literally tagging along the characters through the forest, and it's just the first chapter! I see so much potential in this, I hope the author continues this series. (I'm yet to read from chapter 3, but will catch up soon.) Much love and support! <3
The world has a lot of untapped potential and seems very interesting. The characters are very lively and charming. Although it utilizes the common protagonist tropes of having dead parents with a motivation for revenge, the cliche is good and the sadness is balanced by the occasional heartwarming scenes.
Greetings, readers! Author here. Thank you for those who read, voted, commented, added to their collection, and reviewed my novel! One thing to note, this is mainly a tragedy more than a fantasy book, but there is no such genre in the categories settings. I hope that you enjoy the story I wish to bring to the world. [img=recommend]
This is a great book, only if I had the time to read it!!. it has all the elements you're looking for I couldn't score it a 5 because I wasn't completely done with the book and there isn't such thing as perfect. small minor improvements are needed but this is a masterpiece, would read in time.
Actually wow! Such careful writing with great details. As a reader, you're literally tagging along the characters through the forest, and it's just the first chapter! I see so much potential in this, I hope the author continues this series. (I'm yet to read from chapter 3, but will catch up soon.) Much love and support! <3
The world has a lot of untapped potential and seems very interesting. The characters are very lively and charming. Although it utilizes the common protagonist tropes of having dead parents with a motivation for revenge, the cliche is good and the sadness is balanced by the occasional heartwarming scenes.
Greetings, readers! Author here. Thank you for those who read, voted, commented, added to their collection, and reviewed my novel! One thing to note, this is mainly a tragedy more than a fantasy book, but there is no such genre in the categories settings. I hope that you enjoy the story I wish to bring to the world. [img=recommend]