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The novel started off good though it used many overused tropes, but now they have gone the way of laziness. Chapter 125 or so is when things start to go downhill, and chapter 150+ it turns to garbage. Spoilers ahead as chapter 157 they randomly do a time skip with no warning and start talking about random confusing stuff. In chapter 158 they say over the last 2 years finally saying they did a time skip. In the chapters beyond 158 the novel starts going downhill worse and it seems like they are trying to speedily finish it. In my final conclusion the novel is around 2 stars unless they seriously change some things going forward.
I am so very sick of these alive again, back in time meta knowledge, mmo novels.
This garbage is top one on power ranking ? Give some respect to your writers webnovel.
well this is basically a tragic future get back to the past type of thing along with luck but that's it
yea in the forst 3 chapters theres already so many inconsistencies it literally hurt my brain trying to read this p.o.s dont even bother ur just gna pull ur hair out trying
Although this book is very similar to others in the same genre, I am a huge fan and this is unique enough to get me excited for more more chapters. Author-san, keep up the good work!!!
Really like how this is written. The MC is not dumb as others have stated but actually really brilliant. looking forward to reading more.
it has a rich background and the writing is good and the characters have a unique twist to each of them
Overall, this story is okay if you are just looking for a quick read, just make sure to turn off the logic processors in your brain, so that you don't fry your brain thinking about the author's thought process when writing this. The way that his luck affects HIS CHOICE OF VILLAGE is stupid, because if it's going to redirect him, why even give him a choice in the first place. Author might as well have just done the same thing as he did with the Class and made it auto select.
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The translation quality is overall good while I really like the story and the pace it travels on. The main thing is that I hope I could find more chapters soon.
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Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.
Easily one of the most unoriginal things I've read lately. Time-traveling to play a video game with a cheat? Where haven't I seen this before?
this isn't a serious read and at 20 chapters it's not bad but it's not great. the mc is an idiot just straight up. he creates a character and his talent is luck. he bumbles into something every few steps he either bumps into an npc that gives him a quest or falls down a mine shaft and almost lands on a boss mob. the funniest so far is whe he dumps a viagra powder on a spider boss and a bear boss at the same time and things get interesting lol. anyway the is an idiot, he is a returnee so he names his character "The Returnee" and you get the typical heroic poses. so if you are looking for a light read it's not bad. the translation and spelling is good as also the grammar. if anyone knows the raws would be nice to post it please.
The novel started off good though it used many overused tropes, but now they have gone the way of laziness. Chapter 125 or so is when things start to go downhill, and chapter 150+ it turns to garbage. Spoilers ahead as chapter 157 they randomly do a time skip with no warning and start talking about random confusing stuff. In chapter 158 they say over the last 2 years finally saying they did a time skip. In the chapters beyond 158 the novel starts going downhill worse and it seems like they are trying to speedily finish it. In my final conclusion the novel is around 2 stars unless they seriously change some things going forward.
I am so very sick of these alive again, back in time meta knowledge, mmo novels.
This garbage is top one on power ranking ? Give some respect to your writers webnovel.
well this is basically a tragic future get back to the past type of thing along with luck but that's it
yea in the forst 3 chapters theres already so many inconsistencies it literally hurt my brain trying to read this p.o.s dont even bother ur just gna pull ur hair out trying
Although this book is very similar to others in the same genre, I am a huge fan and this is unique enough to get me excited for more more chapters. Author-san, keep up the good work!!!
Really like how this is written. The MC is not dumb as others have stated but actually really brilliant. looking forward to reading more.
it has a rich background and the writing is good and the characters have a unique twist to each of them
Overall, this story is okay if you are just looking for a quick read, just make sure to turn off the logic processors in your brain, so that you don't fry your brain thinking about the author's thought process when writing this. The way that his luck affects HIS CHOICE OF VILLAGE is stupid, because if it's going to redirect him, why even give him a choice in the first place. Author might as well have just done the same thing as he did with the Class and made it auto select.
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The translation quality is overall good while I really like the story and the pace it travels on. The main thing is that I hope I could find more chapters soon.
............................shsushsuhsuebsuddhdhhshahzhshyfkgsjtsjfsjtsmtsjfsmgsmgdkgdkgdkgdkgdlyxkyxkgxkgdkydlydlyskysktskgsktjtjfjfsjskgxgkdgkdgkhdkgzktxkgslyxkyxkghdlhxlyxlygxlgdlgxktsyl
Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.
Easily one of the most unoriginal things I've read lately. Time-traveling to play a video game with a cheat? Where haven't I seen this before?
this isn't a serious read and at 20 chapters it's not bad but it's not great. the mc is an idiot just straight up. he creates a character and his talent is luck. he bumbles into something every few steps he either bumps into an npc that gives him a quest or falls down a mine shaft and almost lands on a boss mob. the funniest so far is whe he dumps a viagra powder on a spider boss and a bear boss at the same time and things get interesting lol. anyway the is an idiot, he is a returnee so he names his character "The Returnee" and you get the typical heroic poses. so if you are looking for a light read it's not bad. the translation and spelling is good as also the grammar. if anyone knows the raws would be nice to post it please.
I hope the Author Unalives himself 123